#1 Does this suck? I like her pose but it kind of bugs me that her right eye is in the shadow. I've opened up the shadows a bit already.
#2 Here's another.
DavidPhoto Senior Member 777 posts Likes: 1 Joined Mar 2007 Location: MA, USA More info | May 10, 2007 09:41 | #1 #1 Does this suck? I like her pose but it kind of bugs me that her right eye is in the shadow. I've opened up the shadows a bit already. #2 Here's another.
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MKII Goldmember 1,502 posts Joined Mar 2007 Location: greece More info | May 10, 2007 10:27 | #2 the 2nd is fantastic...in the 1st the shadows ennoying me...bad you did a good job.. Facebook Page: http://www.facebook.com/JohnDomPhotography
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MKII Goldmember 1,502 posts Joined Mar 2007 Location: greece More info | May 10, 2007 10:28 | #3 oh...i like the black background...try to dark more the first..the shadows especially... Facebook Page: http://www.facebook.com/JohnDomPhotography
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May 10, 2007 10:37 | #4 thanks. The eyes in #2 bug me a bit too!
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MKII Goldmember 1,502 posts Joined Mar 2007 Location: greece More info | May 10, 2007 10:40 | #5 i didnt say the 2nd..i said the FIRST....READ CAREFULLY...no 2 is perfect...edit no 1 now...im waiting to see the results... Facebook Page: http://www.facebook.com/JohnDomPhotography
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disneydork06 Cream of the Crop More info | May 10, 2007 12:07 | #6 um, your lighting is too broad, you should move it closer to the camera if you want both eyes in the light in the first pic. not bad, nice shots. Ryan
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calicokat Cream of the Crop 14,720 posts Likes: 2 Joined Oct 2005 Location: Southern California More info | May 10, 2007 13:39 | #7 I like #2, nice work "You are going to fall off a cliff trying to get a better shot someday"- My hopeful and loving wife
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May 10, 2007 20:30 | #8 disneydork06 wrote in post #3183901 um, your lighting is too broad, you should move it closer to the camera if you want both eyes in the light in the first pic. not bad, nice shots. Nah the problem was she was turned away from the light. I should have noticed and had her turn slightly back. IIRC this was a single parabolic up high to camera right.
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