Here is a shot in the Kitchen. Some colorful vegetables are under macro photography. How do you rate it?
Your comments and ideas are appreciated.
Vafa
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vafa Member 157 posts Joined Apr 2004 More info | May 08, 2004 08:43 | #1 Here is a shot in the Kitchen. Some colorful vegetables are under macro photography. How do you rate it?
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dn7elson Senior Member 819 posts Joined Apr 2002 More info | May 08, 2004 09:19 | #2 Nice and crisp. The water drops provide a bit of glimmer as well.
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May 08, 2004 10:45 | #3 Thanks for your comments.
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dn7elson Senior Member 819 posts Joined Apr 2002 More info | May 08, 2004 11:15 | #4 vafa wrote: in some cases I feel that an un-complete picture is more demanding. True, and that was the essence of my query. The crop looked somewhat arbitrary and therefore incomplete. A tighter crop might be the answer, but the full peppers and incomplete tomatoes somewhat bother me, particularly the almost there, but truncated tomato at the lower left.
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CDickinson Senior Member 304 posts Joined Apr 2004 Location: Minneapolis, MN More info | May 09, 2004 07:54 | #5 As a chef I can say, composition isn't tight enough and the silver color of the bowl isn't working with the colors of your vegetables....using a bowl for a container might work more to your advantage if its full of vegetables - almost to the point of overflowing - it will show a lushness and fertility...might want to think about if you are telling a story about the bowl (ie what color would do that?) or if you are telling a story about the objects in the bowl.....then figure out arrangements, composition of the shot, lighting, etc.... "Consulting the rules of composition before taking a photograph, is like consulting the laws of gravity before going for a walk" - Edward Weston
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LightHunter Member 220 posts Joined May 2004 Location: Germany More info | May 09, 2004 08:22 | #6 I do not like the compo to much.
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May 09, 2004 21:10 | #7 Thanks for comments. They were realy helpful to me
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djtowle Member 116 posts Joined Apr 2003 Location: California More info | May 15, 2004 20:17 | #8 I agree with the other comments, the technical aspects of the photo are great, focus, color exposure, but at this angle the bowl is a distraction, kind of a round peg in a square hole.
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PhotosGuy Cream of the Crop, R.I.P. More info | May 15, 2004 21:54 | #9 I get the feeling that the crop is so loose because you wanted to include the pepper stalks. FrankC - 20D, RAW, Manual everything...
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