A picture of Lauren C&C welcome!

I'm trying to start learning more about posing. Let me know what you think. I also did some PP on her skin does it look okay? Thanks to all that reply

To my eye, her shoulder and upper arm are a little overwhelming in the shot. Her face is secondary to those other features.

The general pose and mood is good. Maybe having her move her arm back some to give some separation might have helped (making her lean a little more on it).

The exposure and processing is very good.

You're totally right about that! It looks like she has no neck! I wish I caught that when I was taking the picture. D'oh!

I love number three, great colours and concept, although for my taste she could have hammed up the expression even more to go with the colours.

Thanks for your input Jagman!

Great color! Pretty girl too!

Very nice....the colorful, busy BG works well with these

BTW....welcome to posting on the forum I see you joined over a year ago and are just now making your first posts. I look forward to seeing more.

In the first pose have her place the weight of her body on her buns rather than her shoulders, then she can relax that shoulder and it won't be so large.

Benji

The last shot is awesome, great color, and composition

jra wrote in post #3230285
BTW....welcome to posting on the forum I see you joined over a year ago and are just now making your first posts. I look forward to seeing more.

Thanks! I've been signed up but this is my first post

Benji wrote in post #3231220
In the first pose have her place the weight of her body on her buns rather than her shoulders, then she can relax that shoulder and it won't be so large.

Benji

If she leans with her butt more, where do you think her arms should be placed?

Thanks!