My Sweet!

My fiance eating her ice cream...taken today at the park...
C&C please...
taken using my new 50 1.8


edit = new lighter pic uploaded

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Nice shot. The only thing I'd do is touch it up a little in photoshop, it looks a bit dark to me, I'd go to Levels and do like 10, 1.30, 255 and dodge the eyes just a tad to bring them out. Otherwise I love it. And a shame the front of the ice cream was licked, it had nice colored ripples in it, but I'll overlook that - I know how hard it is to NOT eat icecream. LOL!

wow! thanks - i hadn't even noticed the bottom of the ice cream was licked! she should get spanked!
i'll go over it again and edit it...thanks for the feedback - much appreciated!

LOL, the ice cream wasn't that noticable til I started looking more close, I missed it at a first glance as well. I'd love to see your edit once you're done with it.

I likes. It is a good shot, and I like how the whole tonal range of the photo makes the icecream stand out. I read the post above by Sue, and on a second inspection of the photo I saw the 'lick'. It does not bother me, but I am also a big fan of seeing others PP photos to make them look better. So bring it on !!!!....

I think that's a really great image. I tried adding a softer layer, see if you like it.

http://img443.imagesha​ck.us/img443/9316/sall​ywf9.jpg

I like it better generally, though the white area of her eyes is a bit reddish. If you could take that away, and make them the focus point, then in my opinion we have a winner.

Congrats again.

hi all - thanks for the comments again. i've just looked at the pic on a CRT monitor (i use a laptop generally) and the image is indeed darker than on my laptop...i'll edit it and will repost
thanks for the softening edit. what did you use, VINNI?