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May 14, 2004 21:47 |  #1

Thanks for the earlier helpful coments and here is one I have worked on in PS. I am trying to get out of the habbit of putting the model in the center of the photo and to be more creative with my cropping. I have to admit its hard to break the nice clean centered crop. Look forward to your coments again.

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May 15, 2004 19:38 |  #3

#2 - She's giving you a hard look + the sharpness is giving her a hard look, too. If you have Layers, I'd dupe it, add gaussian blur, then reduce the opacity 'till she looks softer. Then erase the blur over her eyes, mouth, etc.
I like #1 for the softness. Women are supposed to be, no?


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May 16, 2004 10:01 |  #4

I like the first pic.

Maybe the modern style garment is not totally in line with the style of the picture, and a white romantic summer dress with laces would be even better, but overall it's a great pic.

I'd make your copyright logo a lot smaller, however, and adjust the size of the (c) so that is at most the same height (including the circle) with the letters.

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