I made this to give to my son's coach as a thank you for his efforts this spring, was looking for suggestions on how to improve it.
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sWampy Senior Member 331 posts Joined Sep 2006 Location: Mississippi More info | May 24, 2007 11:08 | #1 I made this to give to my son's coach as a thank you for his efforts this spring, was looking for suggestions on how to improve it. 400D, 50D, 7D, 550ex, 420ex, 380ex, 50mm f/1.4, 17-85 EFS, 70-200 L f/2.8, 28-70 L f/2.8, 100-400L http://www.melodysphotos.com
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jackies35 Senior Member 796 posts Joined May 2006 More info | May 24, 2007 11:24 | #2 This is great! I love this template!! I love the colors and the funny images... Just a Christian passing by Event Photography.......
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milleker Goldmember 1,851 posts Joined Feb 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland More info | May 26, 2007 01:19 | #3 I like it! Very unique. ---John Milleker Jr.--
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StewartR "your nose is too big" 4,269 posts Joined Jun 2006 Location: Maidenhead, UK More info | May 29, 2007 09:41 | #4 I think it's a really nice thing to do. If I were the coach I'd feel really appreciated. www.LensesForHire.co.uk
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howzitboy Goldmember 2,948 posts Joined May 2007 Location: Hawaii More info | May 29, 2007 19:49 | #5 its cute, they look like baseball cards!! the kids will love it but.... http://onehourwedding.blogspot.com/
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May 31, 2007 11:42 | #6 Thanks for the suggestions, I'm not to crazy about the matt colors, but those are the team colors, gray and white just didn't seem to simulate a matted baseball card set, with a matted team picture in the center, the look I was going for. It's designed to be printed 16x20, there seem to be very, few landscape posters around, so I didn't want to break tradition. StewartR wrote in post #3285336 I think it's a really nice thing to do. If I were the coach I'd feel really appreciated. However, I'm not the coach, and you did say you wanted some C&C.... 1. The red/mauve background is garish. I would have used a black/grey background so that the colours in the photos themeslves have room to breathe. Like on SmugMug 2. I wouldn't have bothered with the ball/glove motif because it just adds clutter. Leave it out and make the pictures of the kids bigger. 3. The lettering around each kid's photo is overdone. You don't need to say "Busby Appraisal 2007" on every photo. I would have cleaned up the lettering: something simple like the name and number (e.g. Wes Thomas #16) is all that's needed. 4. The title is too big and the team portrait is too small. Switching to a landscape format, as milleker suggested, might be one way of making room for a bigger team picture. As things stand, about 30% of the frame is content and about 70% is background /clutter / frippery. It should be the other way round. 400D, 50D, 7D, 550ex, 420ex, 380ex, 50mm f/1.4, 17-85 EFS, 70-200 L f/2.8, 28-70 L f/2.8, 100-400L http://www.melodysphotos.com
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Anyone like this better than the original? I'm still not happy with it. 400D, 50D, 7D, 550ex, 420ex, 380ex, 50mm f/1.4, 17-85 EFS, 70-200 L f/2.8, 28-70 L f/2.8, 100-400L http://www.melodysphotos.com
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