Does this look unreal/over processed?

C&C please- it's the first time I've used our 100-400 for flying birds, so shoot away! I lightened the kite up substantially, using the magnetic lasso tool in PS Elements- does is look over processed?

it looks quite good but you have a halow round the kite mostley on the top of its wing's.

Rob.

Yeah I didn't notice it until I posted it- should I use clone stamp to get rid of it?

Thanks for your C&C Rob

I would clone stamp that and also those jesses from his feet. (or whatever those dangly things are)

Nicely timed and well composed. It looks a bit saturated and dark. I'd use the s/h to lighten the shadow area to bring more detail.

good job, just a bit where u can see by the wings. Id dodge him a bit to seperate him from the background and show a bit more detail.

good shot on a moving object. Caught him right before he blended in with the trees.

thanks all!

Reyno- I lightened him up heaps already- he was pretty dark. The kite goes sort of greyish in patches if I do anymore- any suggestions on how to fix this?