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Another one of Ani for you to correct / post edit :)

 
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May 25, 2004 20:47 |  #1

This one will be a little harder, since it has her in the shadows with some highlight on her right cheek. And all that bright sun in the background.

Give it a go. Let's see the edits, crops etc that you come up with.

Enjoy.

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May 25, 2004 21:09 |  #2

Let's see how it looks...

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I liked the cropping as it is.



  
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May 26, 2004 09:45 |  #3

...jpeg squashes and all, curious how this comes out...

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May 26, 2004 10:12 |  #4

Here is my attempt. I like the crop the way you had it.
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May 26, 2004 12:46 |  #5

Here's a quick and dirty attempt; think I'll try again when I get home and have access to a calibrated monitor...

David

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May 26, 2004 12:51 |  #6

I cropped out the excessive sunshine, and changed color saturation slightly.

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May 26, 2004 14:34 |  #7

My 15 minute contribution:

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May 26, 2004 15:02 |  #8

I enjoyed your last one, so I thought I'd have another go:

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I didn't do much - A slight crop, a white balance adjustment, a bit of skin softening, eye & teeth whitening, a curves adjustment to increase contrast slightly and bring up the mid tones a bit, a final light USM and that was that.

I hope She likes this one too.

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May 26, 2004 21:35 |  #9

My 15 minute contribution:

Frank,
wow, only 15 minutes? :shock:
I like your work! :D




  
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May 26, 2004 21:38 |  #10

Here's a quick and dirty attempt; think I'll try again when I get home and have access to a calibrated monitor...

David


David, I like your work too. wow! :D




  
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May 26, 2004 21:42 |  #11

Calis wrote:
I enjoyed your last one, so I thought I'd have another go:

I didn't do much - A slight crop, a white balance adjustment, a bit of skin softening, eye & teeth whitening, a curves adjustment to increase contrast slightly and bring up the mid tones a bit, a final light USM and that was that.

I hope She likes this one too.

I like your work too, but Frank's is the one so far that I really like. :D




  
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May 26, 2004 21:47 |  #12

I also want to thanks G3, John, Kevin and Bruce for your contributions. :)




  
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May 26, 2004 22:17 |  #13

MrsChevy wrote:
Here's a quick and dirty attempt; think I'll try again when I get home and have access to a calibrated monitor...

David


David, I like your work too. wow! :D

Glad you liked my first attempt... here's the final version

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May 26, 2004 22:34 |  #14

Here is the RAW file if you have broadband and want to play with it instead of a little jpg copy.

http://www.mrchevy.com​/CRW_6803.CRW (external link)

Slow tonight for us, since we are both playing on the www at the same time :)

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May 27, 2004 03:09 |  #15

I thought I had better try my luck too :D

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