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Re-shoot of a earlier photo

 
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Jun 05, 2004 16:40 |  #1

Earlier shot can be seen here:
http://davidlewins.fot​opic.net/p4751681.html (external link)

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Your critique is welcomed - If I remember correctly one of the members was interested in seeing the re-shoot as it was his suggestion to fill the frame with the old wooden capstan.

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Jun 06, 2004 02:40 |  #2

I definately like the new image best. Very nice.


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Jun 06, 2004 02:48 |  #3

yeah, big difference with the 2nd shot...much much better.


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Jun 06, 2004 05:08 |  #4

This shot is much better. Very nice.




  
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Jun 06, 2004 05:40 |  #5

I think I prefer the colours of the second one, but the composition of the original.

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Jun 06, 2004 07:33 |  #6

I prefer the simple composition of the second one...especially that the wooden thing (bollard?) stands alone against the sky instead of against the breakwater.

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Jun 08, 2004 03:48 |  #7

This looks ten times better then the first one, but from perspective point of view I would still like you to go a bit lower with your camera, so the top of the lighthouse is below the top of the pole.

Does anyone have a link to the origial thread? I could not find it anymore.

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Jun 08, 2004 07:45 |  #8

BEAUTIFUL!!!

I like it, I like it, I like it!!!!

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Jun 08, 2004 08:17 |  #9

The second image is stronger. The larger presence of the lighthouse works well. Good reshooting!




  
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Jun 08, 2004 09:02 |  #10

i definetly like the second one .


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Jun 08, 2004 12:08 |  #11

Thanks everyone for your comments - its certainly not an easy one to photograph as the Capstan is quite close to the edge of the pier - hence to get the shot I had to have my legs hanging over the edge of a 7 mtr drop with water below - its a dangrous thing this photography! :lol:

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This looks ten times better then the first one, but from perspective point of view I would still like you to go a bit lower with your camera, so the top of the lighthouse is below the top of the pole.

Does anyone have a link to the origial thread? I could not find it anymore.

Martin

Martin, I couldn't find the original link either and I wasn't sure if it was yourself that had made the suggestion.

Please that you like the re-shoot and I can see what you mean about the top of the lighthouse and the capstan. I've just had a look at the other shots I took and they are all at about the same angle or higher.

However, I don't think I'll be able to re-take the shot again as the local authority were busy constructing a fence to stop people from going down and I had to ask a foreman for permission to enter and take this shot - lucky for me he also does a spot of photography and understood my interest.

If I do get lucky and get to go down again I'll remember to get lower down.

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Jun 09, 2004 15:08 |  #12

I like the new one best. Especially the lighting.




  
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