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Jun 10, 2004 07:47 |  #1

I took this picture last night, I also posted the entire gallery in shared photos.
The tripod was not exactly leveled, and I think this was a fortunate accident, because I think I like it better like this, as it all leans towards the same direction (including the way the stairs go, and the rocks on the top (note title).

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Jun 10, 2004 16:00 |  #2

This is only a stab-in-the-dark but I think I'd like to see some motion blur on the right side of the image - mostly to give the viewer a sense of stumbling, as if the viewer were drunk!?

Its not really an image which gets me excited and I feel that it needs a little something else to hold the viewers attention.

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Jun 10, 2004 16:13 |  #3

I cannot critique this image because it has nothing special to me. It is not because it is not horizontal that it gives me the impression that it was shot by a drunk photographer or so. Hope you don't feel offended.




  
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Jun 10, 2004 17:44 |  #4

LightHunter wrote:
I cannot critique this image because it has nothing special to me. It is not because it is not horizontal that it gives me the impression that it was shot by a drunk photographer or so. Hope you don't feel offended.

That was mean, man :cry:
j/k, I appreciate your opinion.

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This is only a stab-in-the-dark but I think I'd like to see some motion blur on the right side of the image - mostly to give the viewer a sense of stumbling, as if the viewer were drunk!?

would this do anything ?
I added some motion blur on the right side, and I distorted the image a little.

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