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Jun 10, 2004 08:16 |  #1

i took this picture a while back. looks okay to me but i think its missing something.
what do you think?

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Jun 10, 2004 08:19 |  #2

Not bad, not bad at all. I would definitely clone out what ever is floating/swimming in the water. That would include what ever that is in the sun's reflection.

Then, for fun, I would try one without the people, just to see how it looks.

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Also - why does someone post allways post a breathtaker like this just at the same time I post something. Last time I posted, the "Just a Bubble" shot got posted and no one EVER saw my post. ?!


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Jun 10, 2004 09:43 |  #3

Radtech1 wrote:
I would definitely clone out what ever is floating/swimming in the water. That would include what ever that is in the sun's reflection.

Also the airplane!

I would probably crop the picture like this.
I also adjusted the curves a bit in PS.

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Jun 10, 2004 10:25 |  #4

I'm a real sucker for these type of photos :) I agree that the stuff in the water ought to go, but I'd keep the beach and the people on it. I think it adds to the romance.

Well done!

PS. Lighthunter - You are far to observant! I really had to look before I spotted that plane.... or perhaps its all the crud on my screen :oops:


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Jun 10, 2004 10:53 |  #5

thanks for the comments everyone.
i did edit it as adviced(to the best of my photoshop knowldge).

thanks for the edit lighthunter. i didn't want to crop out that little piece of beach land or it would've make the trees look like they're growing in water.

-and the plane. hehe, good eye.

here's the edit.

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Jun 10, 2004 12:05 |  #6

berto wrote:
i didn't want to crop out that little piece of beach land ...

Can understand. I would then suggest to get rid of the black "spot" at the left edge above the piece of land.




  
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Jun 10, 2004 12:18 |  #7

LightHunter wrote:
berto wrote:
i didn't want to crop out that little piece of beach land ...

Can understand. I would then suggest to get rid of the black "spot" at the left edge above the piece of land.

hahaha. i'll leave that spot there as a tribute ti my faults.

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Jun 10, 2004 12:33 |  #8

LightHunter wrote:
Radtech1 wrote:
I would definitely clone out what ever is floating/swimming in the water. That would include what ever that is in the sun's reflection.

Also the airplane!

I would probably crop the picture like this.
I also adjusted the curves a bit in PS.

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I kinda liked it a bit better with the beach, but I would lose the people and the stuff in the water.



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