Please have a look at these?

Ive just really started out and have a Canon 400D

These were taken of my friends whilst waiting for our train in Glasgow.

Comments really Appreciated!

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try doing some levels adjustments. then they will look alot better ! she has nice eyes .

i like the first one. nice bokeh. your friend has beutiful eyes

I like the first one too, but needs some color temp adjustment, contrast, saturation and sharpening.

Here's what I got out of it.

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great colors!!! but could be better. hope you have these as raw... gota bump up the light area using post production software.

I think the post above is a little over exposed. Here's my take.

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I like the edit a little bit more on the first one because you can see her face better (yours is underexposed)- although the skin color looks a bit off.
The second one- same issue w/the first, and it isn't a very flattering of your friend.

really interesting subject!

id like to see a slightly lower angle on the first so her eyes werent cut in half

Thanks alot to everyone!Im gonna take your advice and mess around with the images a bit more.

Ive only recently got a 400D and im not quite ready to shoot RAW yet!

Thanks alot to everyone though