#1 OOF (out of focus), #2 better, still not pin sharp, but pretty good as far as I'm concerned. #3 is much better, the best of the series, lovely lighting and composition to boot.
You may want to try dropping the aperture to something like f8 and upping the ISO to compensate.
As to the parent comment, I'm 38 and will be moving back to my parents place for a variety of personal and financial reasons in the next few days. There's nothing wrong with it, sometimes home is the best place. Parents usualy don't screw you over, others do, that's my life experience.
Dave