carpenter wrote in post #3551969
Love the lighting in #1. The eyes seem a bit overdone in #2.
Thank you. The eyes are definitely overdone in #2... I was going for overdone glamour on that one... seemed fitting for the pose and setting... All smoothed out and overdone..
shuttermom17 wrote in post #3552131
Kristy,Congrats on moving out of your comfort zone. That is when we truly begin to refine our skills both creatively and technically..... of course it's always nice to have the opportunity to do some in a 'practicing' format and with other photographers to do some problem solving. Very nice work!!!
The lighting is good in all of these shots. I'm not sure when these aren't posted in the critique section if it is appropriate to offer CC.... but here are a couple of things that strike me on first glance. On number one, the pose is excellent as is the lighting. I really love how the light is illuminating his right arm. Your 3-4 light set up worked well! My only 'critique' on number one is that it appears as though some of his body oil has rubbed off of his back and so the lighting looks a little flat on those spots. Number two is a great 'location' style shot. Beautiful use of the pool. His eyes bother me... maybe if he could attempt a little more 'sultry' look and relax his eyelids they wouldn't appear quite so "open". And number three is definitely interesting. I'm not sure if the rock on the left side does anything ---- have you looked at the shot without the rock there? Hmmm. Anyway, well done and no doubt you had fun shooting someone who didn't pee on you! LOLShuttermom17 Thank you for your comments. Of course I love CC on everything I post... It's so nice to get another person's viewpoints.... His eyes are just unique in their own right.. his iris's are small-ish and he seems to have more white area around them than the average norm... so it always seems that he is opening his eyes large, when he really is just being normal...
The rock shot was just an experiement at the end of our outdoor session. The sun was gone and it was completely dark, so we continued to play with our strobe outside... I kinda liked how it turned out.. and the rock left in the frame seemed to add to the element with the whole sword thing... I have no idea... I'm used to fluffy sweet babies and pregnant bellies, and little children.. so this was totally off the cuff and oh so much fun!
The subject here was a pleasure to work with and we all had a fun time! 