I don't know what you are trying to get from your site, but i would not link to a flickr or mySpace page, or ANYTHING like that.
Maybe it is just the way i think about it, but i reckon it is a bit of a cop out.
Web hosting is cheap as chips, and putting your own time/money into your own site rather than just linking to a flickr page is a poor effort IMO. You are in the USA, so you can probably even get FREE hosting somewhere.
I think that the effort you put into your website shows, and the more you have on it the better. A home page that says "I am really good, click here for pics" might as well say "Under Construction".
End Rant.
You have some great images in there, and you need to find a way to display them well on YOUR OWN site, not a community share site. The number of people that visit your site AND click the link is slim. Even here on POTN... if people give a link for images rather than embedding them, feedback is generally very slim (except in your case where you are asking for opinions on the whole page etc).
That's my take on it anyway. You have some great images, so don't sell yourself short by taking the easy/cheap option out.
Rob