Second wedding - feedback would be great!

Hi all,

I shot this wedding a couple of weeks ago for a friend - any c&c would be very much appreciated!

Many thanks!

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Thanks for posting.
1. What did you want to viewer to see in this shot?
2. I would imagine the stained glass would be beautiful in color...was the original exposed properly?
3. Good capture and use of wide open aperture
4. Use fill flash and add some color (warmth) to it

I viewed your other shots, and the garden is beautiful! Why not have more colored pics since they would be so vibrant. B&W has its place, but when color is vibrant, then use them. Good job though.

Hi, thanks for sharing! It makes it easier to comment if you number them.

1 - I think she'll like to see the detail of her dress. The darkness has some mood to it, but maybe it's a little too dark?
2 - looks a little crooked (I'm trying to work on that, too), would like to see the stained glass in color
3- too dark, but nice bokeh. Maybe try cropping it from the top and right so it's not so centrally focused
4- is fun, but could have used a little fill flash, try lightening it up a bit and fixing the white balance (shade makes the images on the cool side)
5 - looks like harsh lighting, but you did pretty well. I think it would look better if it were bigger, then we could see more detail
6 - I think they'll like this one. Nice bokeh again, but it's a little dark. Try some vignette as well.