hi everyone,its me agian,i just took a man listing to the rodio on a old couch in the getto,if you guys could critisize this one for my i would be so thankfull
varuj Senior Member 330 posts Joined May 2007 Location: van nuys ca More info | Jul 25, 2007 03:01 | #1 hi everyone,its me agian,i just took a man listing to the rodio on a old couch in the getto,if you guys could critisize this one for my i would be so thankfull
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kenyc Cream of the Crop More info | Jul 25, 2007 06:17 | #2 Dude, there's no cushions on that couch. Kenny A. Chaffin
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ya i know lol,i was just walkin by tryin to find something to shoot,and i see this man listing to hte radio on this couch,i thought it would be a cool pic lol,thanks for the comment
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NitroTang Senior Member 479 posts Joined Mar 2006 Location: Bay Area, CA More info | Jul 25, 2007 16:52 | #4 Good eye, but something about the angle of the shot doesn't really work. With all those lines, maybe you could've gotten a straight on shot? Interesting subject nevertheless. Derek Tang Photography
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superdiver Cream of the Crop 9,862 posts Likes: 5 Joined Jan 2006 Location: Ketchikan Alaska More info | Jul 25, 2007 17:28 | #5 The only thing I dont lile about it is that its too dark on my monitor...and maybe that is what you were going for? 40D, davidalbertsonphotography.com
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Suicidenote Senior Member 672 posts Joined Aug 2006 Location: Los Angeles, CA More info | Jul 25, 2007 18:30 | #6 I like the angle and shawdows, maybe crop a little closer. It is a bit dark on the guy, but that is because he is sitting in the shade, which I like how it has the light coming down the right side and shows him sitting in the shadow of the building. Gear List:
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kenyc Cream of the Crop More info | Jul 25, 2007 20:53 | #7 I keep looking at this and like it better every time. I too just noticed that stuffed animal a couple of looks back. Kenny A. Chaffin
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thanks for critisizing guys,helps me out a lot,o and that stuffed animal is just the stuffing from the pillow
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August15Photography Senior Member 423 posts Joined Dec 2006 Location: Seattle, WA More info | Jul 26, 2007 01:23 | #9 I like the shot, the only thing I would change is I would have used the simple rule of thirds, he is almost smack in the middle of the image. I would have maybe placed him in the lower and right third. The couch and the three layers of bricks create a nice line. I like it though. Oooooh they have the internet on computers now. - Homer Simpson
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bestfromnw Goldmember 1,192 posts Joined Sep 2006 Location: Donetsk, Ukraine Portland, OR More info | Jul 26, 2007 02:41 | #10 good shot, i would try it in black in white. imo it would look more impactful My Gear Temporary web site
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thanks ill try that
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shannyD "...in too much trouble" 5,219 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jul 2007 Location: scrotumento CA, miss NC, and lived in th north east for a while, and even in the mid west for a bit. More info | Jul 27, 2007 15:08 | #12 you were right. pretty ghetto. but i like it. its simple, human.
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i dont know y but i love the getto,its beauty to my eyes,i just cant find a lot of getto places
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