Just looking to become a better photographer so I need all the help I can get. What would have made this a better shot?
MaloneWhite Member 97 posts Joined Feb 2006 Location: Brooklin, Ontario, Canada More info | Aug 14, 2007 08:19 | #1 |
Radtech1 Everlasting Gobstopper 6,455 posts Likes: 38 Joined Jun 2003 Location: Trantor More info | Aug 14, 2007 09:06 | #2 Put bluntly, it could be in focus. .
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dmbecker Senior Member 285 posts Joined Jul 2007 Location: Northern Illinois More info | Aug 14, 2007 09:21 | #3 I would try to tone down the hotspots at the top of the head and on the legs. Little sharper would help...but I'm not sure if it's your transition to a lower-res jpg or if it's actually OOF. The red pillow/bag/or whatever it is keeps drawing my attention (along with the stroller). Also, great expression.
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Aug 14, 2007 09:48 | #4 I didn't actually want any of that in the background...just saw the face and took the shot and it happened to be there. Thanks for the comments...the RAW image looks sharper for sure. _______________
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dmbecker Senior Member 285 posts Joined Jul 2007 Location: Northern Illinois More info | Aug 14, 2007 11:39 | #5 Malone: That's what I figured about the sharpness. It is a precious shot...one of those hard-to-capture moments. Nice job.
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