Angelica...

Im posting here bc i cant post in the glamour section. I was shadowing another photographer so she's not looking at me. It was my 1st time shooting with a model; normally I'll just shoot the car's by itself. Let me know what you all think.

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I'm feelin these photos, I like them. The only problem is that the most important thing in the photo is OOF. The other cars in the background are a distraction. Clone them out.

I think you need to spend more time in Photoshop.

The photos seem a little red, a bit dull, soft, and some unwanted objects could be removed.

eye pretty good poses there, however on nr 2 and 4 i think the girl is way underexposed, specially on nr 2, i guess you made the exposure for the sky.

edit : i made a 1 second edit with lightroom, ( fill light ), hope you don't mind here, link can be removed in seconds.

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took it further, exposured the girl, and the skie... combined

Good edit. I might have desaturated the skin tone a little, and boosted what little blue there is in the sky too.

like this ? btw thanks for your comments.

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I like it...thanx for the tips guys. Her skin was accually a little orange. I asked her about it and she told me she used that tan in a can crap lol. I tried using the flash in some but it just wouldnt charge back up to take the following pic fast enough. (new batteries) It would take like 20+ seconds...external flash btw

Except for the backgrounds, I like 'em. Especially the 1st one. besides cleaning up the background, I would rotate just slightly to ensure that the "streetart" text is perfectly horizontal.

I feel bad, but at first glance, I thought the first image read "Street Tart Motorsports"...

Next time take a flash and expose for the sky. You'll dig it.