Hey Jeff,
1. Nice, intimate pose and PP. Wonder what this would like like with a closer crop though?
2. I like it, but I am not a fan of the colors. I find they're very distracting and detract from the emotion in the photo. I'd honestly give 'er a try in B&W, I think you'll find that the flow and the feeling of the photo is much better.
3. Awesome! Nice location! Maybe a bit of fill from down low to get rid of some shadows? Nice, subtle tilt - I like!
4. Not even gonna say it. You already know how I feel about this shot. In fact, you probably took this shot with me in mind "I'm going to do it this way because I know it'll piss Bryan off".
5. Wow! Absolutely breathtaking Jeff, I love it! One of my favorite photos by you.
6. I do like it, and, I'm being super critical in my C&C. Nice concept, but a few things bother me about it. First, I wish they were closer. Second, I wish they weren't walking out to the water. It leads me to think a few things:
a) It is overly-posed and they aren't actually walking anywhere, just posing for a camera (which you don't want in a photo)
b) Why are they walking out to the water? It doesn't make any sense to me. I'd prefer to see them walking out on the beach. Again, just a nitpick.
7. Stellar! Nice use off off-cam flash! How many did you use here? Just 1? You can get rid of the "deer in headlights" look in this photo by turning down the luminance in the orange channel in Lightroom 
8. Awesome photo! Amazing, that's all I can say! I'd give 'er a go in B&W though to be honest. Although you know I'm impartial to a nice B&W conversion 
9. Nice pose, lighting, composition and, just in general, a stellar photo! I like it!
10. This is like directly out of a magazine! What a great looking couple. I like the shot 
11. I love the emotion in this shot. You really captured a special moment. Unbelievable.
All in all Jeff, tip of the hat to you, these are amazing! You keep getting better and better with every wedding!
Can't wait to 2nd shoot with you 