First post, but it seems like this is a great community. I have worked with this picture over and over, and think I finally got it how I want it, but I wanted to check how it looks on a monitor that's properly calibrated. Thanks in advance for any critiques or help, and feel free to play with it (though you may have better luck with an unedited version).
My apologies if this is too big - please let me know if there is a preferred method of attaching images.

). Is there something else I'm missing?

