A nice set you have there.
7 could have been better if you had turned them a bit so you can see more of them. Right now you mainly just see the grooms back. And the leg holding shots work best with the dress hiked up to show the leg, otherwise it looks like he's holding a bunch of dress.
in 8, he is just looking at the camera with a totally blank expression... that doesn't do much for me. She looks totally interested in him, yet the is doing nothing. Do you have a shot of them both looking at each other?