Kiwi - GKPE - General Ramblings (2)

I have to remember to zip up my camera bag before I pick the bag up...

Lets just say my telephoto lens went flying out, smacked into a wooden chair and made a glorious thump.

I had no words. But a huge deep breath...

Is it OK?

Well i frantically put it on the body and aimed it at something. And it wouldn't auto focus


But it was in Manual focus

Mediation wrote in post #4162747
Well i frantically put it on the body and aimed it at something. And it wouldn't auto focus


But it was in Manual focus

That was lucky then. Hey Matt, don't forget to do your bag up next time.

lil_miss wrote in post #4162730
I think you need to remove the words " image 1-3" etc from under the thumbnails..

Does the info page read correctly? Anything you would add or remove.

Pours glass 3

Anyone want any honest commenst now is starting to be a good time

weka2000 wrote in post #4162712
******Please rip to bits*******

Oh but be nice as Baileys makes me xtra fiesty

http://models.tonysear​le.co.nz/index.html

Yup, thumbnails need to be relabeled, and the links section needs a little work. Formatting, and a bit of info about those two links at the bottom of the page would be helpful.

Now the good bits. Great to navigate through, nice and clean and fairly quick.

Cheers, Shane.

weka2000 wrote in post #4162712
******Please rip to bits*******

Oh but be nice as Baileys makes me xtra fiesty

http://models.tonysear​le.co.nz/index.html

looking much more polished - looks like a lot of time went in. There's just a coupla nitpicky things to iron out and you'll be good to go.
On the links page, the "Makeup Artists" link heads off to allwebco-templates.com - presume this isn't what you want?

On the info page there's a couple of typo's - "For the recored" should be "record"
"Affraid" should be "afraid" - apart from that I'd suggest a space between "wacky" and they. "Wish I tryed this" should read "tried"
There's also a space between the "L's" in "nervousness will have gone" that needs moving.
typo's notwithstanding, it all makes sense and quite a good read.

well done.
(this from a student who failed school cert. English)

joeseph wrote in post #4162776
(this from a student who failed school cert. English)

I failed twice 27-yr1 22-yr2 ah engrish is over rated

weka2000 wrote in post #4162764
Does the info page read correctly? Anything you would add or remove.

Pours glass 3

Anyone want any honest commenst now is starting to be a good time

My favorites are:

1-2 - Because the lighting creates a glow, which brings out a radiance in her eyes. The black and white choice is spot on and it is a very telling and honest shot.

4-1 - Its active, interesting and has a certain character to it. Its an enjoying moment, yet compelling to see. Most importantly its fun and new / vibrant. Its got energy and pop

5-5 - Love the use of the structured frame. Great colours used to contrast the background with, well, herself. The pink bikini is very flattering. And most importantly her body position is wide open and revealing and not closed. Very appealing. This shot is much like 4-1. Cutting edge and fun. Love that buzz.

6-2 - This shot has excellent colours. The use of red is perfect. A nice relaxed body with a killer smile. Clean lighting coming from the window gives it a nice warm overtone. But most importantly, from my view, you have hit the focus points spot on. Utilizing the redness and patterns on her top and a strong focus on her face. Whilst place the arm out of focus draws my eyes into her aura.

Thats my analysis. I learned how to read images through my media studies degree. I would bring in my technical terms but i could be writing on for ever... So basically Tony. I love these images because you can have a presence with the model yourself (as in me, the person looking at the image). They are engaging and telling, they have energy...

Hope that helps?

weka2000 wrote in post #4162712
******Please rip to bits*******

Oh but be nice as Baileys makes me xtra fiesty

http://models.tonysear​le.co.nz/index.html

Looking good layout wise (using Opera here), but a bit confusing. Why do all the galleries run together when you use the arrows to scroll through them?

momentz wrote in post #4162797
Looking good layout wise (using Opera here), but a bit confusing. Why do all the galleries run together when you use the arrows to scroll through them?

Unsure will check. Whats confusing?

Lil Miss and Duncan corrections made

Mediation wrote in post #4162795
Thats my analysis. I learned how to read images through my media studies degree. I?

Cool I look at a photo and I just like it. Never undersood all the other bits just a country boy

Mediation wrote in post #4162747
Well i frantically put it on the body and aimed it at something. And it wouldn't auto focus




But it was in Manual focus

I got confused after someone replied thats good then. Fourth time round reading the post, I looked down to the bottom. Good to hear.

weka2000 wrote in post #4162800
Unsure will check. Whats confusing?

Confusing as in I clicked on the first gallery, and scrolled through all the images, then went to look through the second, and I was looking at the same images - due to them having run together.

momentz wrote in post #4162816
Confusing as in I clicked on the first gallery, and scrolled through all the images, then went to look through the second, and I was looking at the same images - due to them having run together.

Is it still doing it?