09-22-2007 - Tara & Ryan

and again...

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one last one...

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tim wrote in post #3993758
1. Ok but i'd have put her on the right of frame and left space where she was looking towards.
2. Great location and lighting, terrible expression and basically from the neck up I don't like it.
3. Nice, distracting tail light
4. Nice.
5. Great
6. ok.
7. Cool
8. Meh.
9. Quite cool.
10/11. Meh.
12. Nice.
13. Ok.
14. Cool.
15. I really like this one.

Overall... average work by your standards, with a couple of great shots. Sure they're pretty and they're cool. Don't let everyone here telling you you're great go to your head. While you're very good I think you have the potential to be great. I'd stop trying to make pretty shots and get back to basics, capturing the emotion and feelings of the wedding day. Go post on the DWF and get useful critique from the real pros, rather than posting here for an ego boost.

Tim - uncalled for and unnecessary. I think these shots are Jeff's best work, and you think that you can take a hit on the whole POTN boards and get away with it like this? Comon man, you know better. Grow up a bit.

Wow! That is rude. I think we can all benefit for some constructive critique but there is no need to be rude and degrade not only his work but him as a person. There is no room in this thread for comments like that in my opinion.

Tim, please don't comment on my photos unless you have something intelligent to offer. Sorry but that's how I feel!

I guess that's why he's Mr Blunt!

tim wrote in post #3993758
1. Ok but i'd have put her on the right of frame and left space where she was looking towards.
2. Great location and lighting, terrible expression and basically from the neck up I don't like it.
3. Nice, distracting tail light
4. Nice.
5. Great
6. ok.
7. Cool
8. Meh.
9. Quite cool.
10/11. Meh.
12. Nice.
13. Ok.
14. Cool.
15. I really like this one.

Overall... average work by your standards, with a couple of great shots. Sure they're pretty and they're cool. Don't let everyone here telling you you're great go to your head. While you're very good I think you have the potential to be great. I'd stop trying to make pretty shots and get back to basics, capturing the emotion and feelings of the wedding day. Go post on the DWF and get useful critique from the real pros, rather than posting here for an ego boost.

Denise - I do like #1 - it looks like a magazine ad!

And #3 is great - I love the wide angle on this one!

I really like the concept of #4 - but I wish you had the groom facing in instead. Great work overall though - 2nd shooting w/ Jeff is awesome eh? lol

yes except she doesn't take any pictures of me!! I don't think she thinks I'm hot like you do Bryan lol

Toogy wrote in post #3994005
yes except she doesn't take any pictures of me!! I don't think she thinks I'm hot like you do Bryan lol

I doubt that. You're pretty irresistable.

... man ... double feature of Free Willie on tonight, this is fantastic!

Sorry, off topic. lol

bcap wrote in post #3993930
Tim - uncalled for and unnecessary. I think these shots are Jeff's best work, and you think that you can take a hit on the whole POTN boards and get away with it like this? Comon man, you know better. Grow up a bit.

PixelChick78 wrote in post #3993963
Wow! That is rude. I think we can all benefit for some constructive critique but there is no need to be rude and degrade not only his work but him as a person. There is no room in this thread for comments like that in my opinion.

Tim, please don't comment on my photos unless you have something intelligent to offer. Sorry but that's how I feel!

I guess that's why he's Mr Blunt!

You think that was rude? I guess you guys really can't take honesty. Has PC really gone that far that people can't take a bit of critique? I'm in the middle of my working day here, trying to help Jeff out by telling him how I think he could improve. I'm going to PM a mod for a 2nd opinion.

I didn't make any personal comments towards Jeff, I commented on his work. I stand behind my comments, including that Jeff has the potential to be great. Jeff doesn't seem to be moving forward, I think he would benefit from the guidance of experienced professionals to help him improve.

PixelChick, I didn't comment on your images at all.

Actually, there is a folder on my computer called "Jeff Toogood"

I didn't get as many this time but here is a few from the last one...

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I was hoping you would! I wore new pants and a new shirt and everything lol

tim wrote in post #3993758
1. Ok but i'd have put her on the right of frame and left space where she was looking towards.
2. Great location and lighting, terrible expression and basically from the neck up I don't like it.
3. Nice, distracting tail light
4. Nice.
5. Great
6. ok.
7. Cool
8. Meh.
9. Quite cool.
10/11. Meh.
12. Nice.
13. Ok.
14. Cool.
15. I really like this one.

Overall... average work by your standards, with a couple of great shots. Sure they're pretty and they're cool. Don't let everyone here telling you you're great go to your head. While you're very good I think you have the potential to be great. I'd stop trying to make pretty shots and get back to basics, capturing the emotion and feelings of the wedding day. Go post on the DWF and get useful critique from the real pros, rather than posting here for an ego boost.

Rude and not anything helpful! Besides slamming Jeff, you also just put down many others that have responded to these shots. Are you saying that all of these people that critiqued are amatures?

IMO Jeff does awesome work and asks for honest, helpful feedback. He listens to what others say and often uses their advice.

Letting it go to his head or need an ego boost! HA! HA! Right!

tim wrote in post #3994017
You think that was rude? I guess you guys really can't take honestly. Has PC really gone that far that people can't take a bit of critique? I'm in the middle of my working day here, trying to help Jeff out by telling him how I think he could improve. I'm going to PM a mod for a 2nd opinion.

I didn't make any personal comments towards Jeff, I commented on his work. I stand behind my comments, including that Jeff has the potential to be great. Jeff doesn't seem to be moving forward, I think he would benefit from the guidance of experienced professionals to help him improve.

PixelChick, I didn't comment on your images at all.

Comments like "Meh" is not going to help him improve.

Toogy wrote in post #3994031
I was hoping you would! I wore new pants and a new shirt and everything lol

The bermuda shorts you had on yesterday hardly qualify as new pants Jeff!

humm. let me see if I got a shot of those...