New to Posting not to the forum... C&C appreciated

Hello guys, I have been a lurker for a while and finally decided to come out and show some of my work. I shot two weddings this weekend and am looking for some C&C of my images...

Here are some shots from Fridays wedding:

Welcome Allison! I really like 2, 3 and 4 of your 2nd set! Great job. In the 1st set I'm not to fond of the posing 4 & 5..I think it's not very flattering to the bride. Just my opinion tho.. #2 and 3 of the 1st set I do like..great job. Thanks for sharing

Thanks for taking the time to look at my images.... I appreciate your view on them as well. Thanks!

Allison,

Wounderful photography...full of grace, love, and emotion. I really like 2 & 3 in the first set and 2 & 5 in the second. You may be new to the POTN Wedding Forum but not to wedding photography...your fine photos speak for themselves.

Solid work. I'd suggest one area to consider is making people comfortable expressing their emotions for each other around you, then capturing it.

#4 would be great if they were all looking toward the camera I think.

Nice post, but the depth and breadth of your website is far more impressive.

Your father's site has some excellent content; just browsing the text..............

Jim - Thank you for the kind words

Tim - You actually keyed on an aspect I have personally been working on. (Comfort levels of the party around me while shooting) Do you have any tips or tricks that you might share? Thank you for taking the time to look and comment.

hortonsl62 - Thank you as well for the nice words.

Very nice! I agree with Maui about the brides positioning in 4 and 5. And I don't know why but I am not really liking the shoes in the first one. I am so glad you are no longer a lurker. Welcome.

Here are a couple more from Friday's wedding:

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I think I see your father's advice here -- make color look like B&W......... Interesting look, because it pulls the eye in -- don't see a lot of that.

I wonder how many other 'lurkers' have this kind of talent?

Welcome to POTN.

This is great work here Allison! I'm very impressed! I think you should be posting here more often

hortonsl62 - I try to follow my fathers teachings as I think he is a very talented photographer (really not being biased here) He has tons of info/insight to offer..

I see that you have read some of his tips

bcap - Thanks for the kind words.. I was actually thinking there would be a little more on the crit side from you (in a good way)