6-10-07 wedding

I was second shooter today, I like to do it occasionally, you get all the fun with none of the responsibility. Here's a few of my favorites, constructive C&C welcome. I'm up to step 8 of my workflow...

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Niiice Tim !

That last one is the bomb !!!

Nice ones Tim!

1. I would like this one in a tighter crop also.

2. Cute! Great emotion! She looks soooo happy!

3. NICE! Love the building setting! Did you get any in this location where you can see there faces? I would like to see that too!

4. Same as 3

5. Aawwhhh! This one is wonderful! Love the emotion!

Good job! I bet your friend will be very pleased!

Fantastic!

Awesome Tim

I love 2.

you caught some good emotion!

I like #3 the most but it looks a little flat to me.

..adopts Timlike tone.."ahem... You really should number your pictures before posting. It makes C+C much easier" Sorry, Couldn't resist (dang, can't get these smiley faces to work

I like the last one especially. Simply great! 3 & 4 are very nice.

To a viewer completely separated from the event, the second one doesn't appeal to me. The emotion is there, but to me the pose does not look natural and the head tilt isn't flattering.

Your use of the rule of thirds is awesome in the last three. I've not seen better examples of how to frame and compose.

As you can see, my suggestions on #2 are strictly subjective to my tastes. The quality work you've displayed on the forum is exceptional to anyone's tastes.

Kevin

#1 ....i like to see the zoom closer to see the hand hold , because it kind the weir to see the body get chop off the head .

And the last one , the head of the Groom got chop off again ,the crop is too tight .

Tim, These are great

Can you photoshop the first and last ones together?

LOL!!

Very nice, but the color ones need a tad more color/contrast.

Thanks everyone. I took color away from a couple of the photos because that's how I wanted them to look. #1 I had cropped originally but I decided to use the whole shot. #2 was completely unposed. Kathy #3 the guy working main got, but I didn't. I have all the shots but don't want to post someone elses work.

s8langwo wrote in post #4076041
The quality work you've displayed on the forum is exceptional to anyone's tastes.

Thanks Kevin

1st and last two are excellent ones Tim. number one didnt grab my attention immediately - then on closer inspection I realise you captures a great moment.

Post more when u have time...

Good work tim, especially the last 3. I'm on the other wagon though, think more colour saturation would work, although I know that was the effect you were looking for. Plenty of love and emotions, but being desaturated I get the feeling of coldness