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Oct 19, 2007 02:07 | #1

Here are some pictures from my first wedding.
no editing done at all.
Waiting for C&C "i need the to improve "

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Oct 19, 2007 02:07 | #2

and more pics

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Oct 19, 2007 02:08 as a reply to @ amironsi's post | #3

and more

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Oct 19, 2007 02:09 as a reply to @ amironsi's post | #5

and final 2... that's my best ones from this wedding

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Oct 19, 2007 02:11 | #6

I think you did a good job, there's room for improvement with the lighting, but overall NICE WORK! :-)

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Oct 19, 2007 02:32 as a reply to @ scot079's post | #7

hi amir,

Some of the pics, the groom is looking at you, but not the bride.

#1 - the mirror - you are OOF (out of focus) - your focus was on the mirror frame, not on her reflection.
#2 - Also is OOF. the focus fell on the hand that holding the ringed finger, not the ring itself.
#3 - It seems the groom is ok focus (even I feel a little bit OOF), but not the bride. I am not sure maybe it's because of file compression ?
#4 - I like to see more detail and close up of the crown.
#5 - is ok shot, but why the groom is looking at you but not the bride ?
#6 - is ok shot
#7 - is ok shot
#8 - again the groom is OOF
#9 - on the golf cart, well you need to crop that guy on the left side.
#10 - too center and also the groom is looking at you but not the bride

I like image that follow one third rule (not strictly), but basically not putting the object on the center all the time. Also, pay attention of unneccesary space surrounding the object.
Just my personal opinion.
They are really beautiful couple. the bride is very beautiful.

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Oct 19, 2007 02:49 | #8

Great moments - room for improvement in lighting and DOF (I think it's a little too high)

but good stuff! better than my first wedding haha =P

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Oct 19, 2007 07:46 | #9

In my opinion that bride is drop dead gorgeous!

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Oct 19, 2007 07:50 | #10

I guess for using the lens in your signature that these are ok, but I would recommend if you are going to shoot another wedding that you look into getting a better lens, and even better than the one that is on the way as well.
My first thought when I looked at these is that these all could have been taken by a guest. Most of these look like snapshots.
1. Get in closer to your subjects.
2. You need to really work on your flash technique.
3. Know where your focus points are in the shots.
4. Make sure you have backup equipment if you are going to shoot another wedding.

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Oct 19, 2007 10:33 | #11

stathunter wrote in post #4153228

In my opinion that bride is drop dead gorgeous!

yeah I agree that bride is something else... whew! :shock:

Orthodox wedding I assume?

Now, what was the scenario for these? Were you the hired, paid pro? Are you a friend who's doing this as a favour? Or were you a guest taking pics whenever you could?

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Oct 19, 2007 11:49 | #12

picturecrazy wrote in post #4153939

yeah I agree that bride is something else... whew! :shock:

Orthodox wedding I assume?

Now, what was the scenario for these? Were you the hired, paid pro? Are you a friend who's doing this as a favour? Or were you a guest taking pics whenever you could?

I was doing this to my friends... as the bride and groom are my friends..
yes this is a an Coptic orthodox wedding... and i didnt' get paid... it was my first wedding... and don't know if i should go on or not??

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Oct 19, 2007 11:55 | #13

ok pics,

the bride is ... wow

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Oct 19, 2007 14:32 | #14

Nice work, although there is room for improvement the shots are ok. Remember to always FOCUS on what you want.

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