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Oct 22, 2007 19:14 |  #1

Ok these are for a class and customer. Please tell me what you think. More to come

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Oct 22, 2007 19:23 |  #2

Looks good. My only thought is that one flower is good....maybe a little too busy with multiple and the bow. just a thought.


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Oct 22, 2007 20:33 |  #3

I like it. Looks sharp and clean.


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Oct 22, 2007 20:40 |  #4

Two points.
1) Nice composition.
2) Poor grammar. The word ''these' means more than one. You should have said "this is for a class, and a customer, and there are more to come." I suspect you are an American, so that 'figures'.


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Oct 23, 2007 23:11 |  #5

dsc_1972 wrote in post #4173308 (external link)
Two points.
1) Nice composition.
2) Poor grammar. The word ''these' means more than one. You should have said "this is for a class, and a customer, and there are more to come." I suspect you are an American, so that 'figures'.

1, Thank you
2, Never asked about my grammar, but thanks for pointing it out:rolleyes:


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Oct 24, 2007 09:54 |  #6

dsc_1972 wrote in post #4173308 (external link)
Two points.
1) Nice composition.
2) Poor grammar. The word ''these' means more than one. You should have said "this is for a class, and a customer, and there are more to come." I suspect you are an American, so that 'figures'.

It's possible that the OP was going to put more than one image - thereby he used "these are" and not "this is." If he had written "these is" then I'd say there's a problem.

It's perfectly acceptable to write "This is for a class and a customer. There are more to come."

It's sad that I'm Korean and have better grammar than a lot of "Americans." I probably also have better grammar than many Brits. Now, THAT is sad since they're the ones that invented "English." Hahah!


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Oct 24, 2007 10:43 |  #7

invented not perfected ;)
just like football (soccer to you american type folks)


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Oct 24, 2007 23:25 |  #8

Correct I was going to post the second photo but with the fires I have had NO time


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