Fyerfytr Senior Member  565 posts Joined Sep 2007 Location: Des Moines, Iowa More info | Oct 29, 2007 21:05 | #1 C+C Welcome, it was a practice shot so any help for the next shoot would be great. I Photoshopped a bit with warming filter and Sat a bit.  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size.  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size.
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Oct 29, 2007 21:09 | #2 They look pretty good. Good lighting. A little soft. Nice job
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henleg Senior Member  373 posts Joined Feb 2005 Location: Melbourne, Australia More info | Quite pleasant. If you're using auto focus, make sure the right focus point is registering. The second photo has the tree trunk in focus instead of the gentlemans face. There are also a couple of hotspots on the tree in the background of the first and his face in the second. You can't destroy the world! That's where I keep all my stuff!!!
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Oct 29, 2007 21:33 | #4 HQP wrote in post #4215206  They look pretty good. Good lighting. A little soft. Nice job Thanks! Here is another...  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size.
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Oct 29, 2007 21:34 | #5 Fyerfytr wrote in post #4215344 Thanks! Here is another... Hen, Yep you are right. Thanks... I will make sure on the next shoot. Arrgh...  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size.
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liza Cream of the Crop 11,386 posts Likes: 1 Joined Feb 2005 Location: Mayberry More info | Oct 29, 2007 21:53 | #6  Permanent banThough nicely saturated, they appear to be a bit soft and lack pop. Try a slight S curve adjustment and perhaps high pass sharpening or a couple of passes of USM. You also need to shoot in portrait orientation. Yearbooks don't accept photos shot in landscape.
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joruiz Goldmember  1,619 posts Likes: 313 Joined Oct 2006 More info | Oct 29, 2007 21:57 | #7 I agree with previous comments about being a bit soft. I also feel they are a bit on the warm side... and one last comment if I may Cantisani
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Oct 29, 2007 22:07 | #8 joruiz wrote in post #4215497 I agree with previous comments about being a bit soft. I also feel they are a bit on the warm side... and one last comment if I may  .. he looks not very happy in the first picture, you have to direct him to give you a nice smile.. like this:  It's a good set, I'm sure he likes them! :p Joel Thanks for the comments, It's hard to get him to smile he is a "tough guy"
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Oct 29, 2007 22:09 | #9 liza wrote in post #4215467 Though nicely saturated, they appear to be a bit soft and lack pop. Try a slight S curve adjustment and perhaps high pass sharpening or a couple of passes of USM. You also need to shoot in portrait orientation. Yearbooks don't accept photos shot in landscape. I didn't think I was in Landscape mode, I shot all in Manual Mode...
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Oct 29, 2007 22:15 | #10 joruiz wrote in post #4215497 I agree with previous comments about being a bit soft. I also feel they are a bit on the warm side... and one last comment if I may .. he looks not very happy in the first picture, you have to direct him to give you a nice smile.. like this: It's a good set, I'm sure he likes them! :p Joel One more with a bit of a smile.  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size.
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sonshine_rae Senior Member  516 posts Likes: 3 Joined Jul 2006 Location: USA, Midwest More info | Oct 29, 2007 22:35 | #11 I agree with the previous posters on the focus being a bit soft, as well as the highlights being blown in some areas. ~Rae~
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Oct 29, 2007 22:57 | #12 sonshine_rae wrote in post #4215696 I agree with the previous posters on the focus being a bit soft, as well as the highlights being blown in some areas. But I just wanted to point out.. I believe they meant Landscape Orientation (not camera mode), and Portrait Orientation.. so basically turn your camera vertical instead of horizontal. hth's, ~Rae~ Great, thanks for the clarification.
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