My friend Amélie

My first "photoshoot with a model ever" yesterday. It was also her first.

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Very good effort for a first time, model is very pretty and you have captured her nicely.
Love the first shot, eyes in focus and good pose.

nice job with the lighting and overall. the 3rd seems a little dark.

Love them. Great to see an urban style of model shooting. I congratulate you for making your first photoshoot so damn good to see i enjoyed your set!

Lovely model, nice shots. They seem a little dark or flat to me.

Chris

Like them...if you had editing turned on, I'd make a suggestion regarding the third to punch it up a bit (my opinion only, of course)...Very nicely done...would like to see more...

Thanks for the C&C guys, very appreciated. Here's one more, I would post another bunch if Aperture could stop crashing on my Mac Mini.

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Well done.

very nice model, they need a little boost or maybe they are a tad underexposed.

very good effort, to me the first image looks a little cold, and im not to keen on the 2nd pose, something about it just doesnt look natural or pleasent?? might be me though haha.

other then that they look really good to me

Not bad for a first try!
Not sure about the pose in #2, seems awkward....or maybe the lack of details in the black just makes it look more awkward than it is? I dunno.
#3 is nice but a smidgen dark, a little levels and it should pop as well.
Good work!

beautiful model.. i like the contrast between her makup and the nature in the first pic