Graffiti shoot

I'd love your input:

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What's with the blue streaks under the eyes in the last pic?


I like the coat and the background together in #1. Maybe white stockings would have given more light to the bottom half of the image. It's a very good shot, I'm just throwing out an idea is all.

Canonista wrote in post #4324473
What's with the blue streaks under the eyes in the last pic?


I like the coat and the background together in #1. Maybe white stockings would have given more light to the bottom half of the image. It's a very good shot, I'm just throwing out an idea is all.

she had her makeup done, its some crazy eyeliner setup lol.....looks pretty cool in a full res version

I like them! The only think I see is that in #1 There is not any detail in the black of her stockings and part of her skirt. Too dark in those areas.

I think your colors look great and I love the composition, the only thing I’m not real keen on is the facial expression in the first. Other than that I like them.

i really like No 2 works very well background pose dress all good.
Rob.

I agree with Char on the lighting in #1, needs more on the lower portion of the frame, her legs and skirt blend with the wall, not good. Otherwise the lighting on her face and such is excellent, her eyes pop nicely on their own in that one, maybe just a slight dodge to emphasis them a bit more 10% opacity once or twice. But minor detail.
#2 Lighting is much better overall...I'd like to see more of a catchlight in her eyes...they're a bit dark...otherwise nice work.
Their clothing fits nicely with the graffiti walls chosen...love 'em.

Great colors in #2~
I agree about the first.a little more definition between her legs and the background would pop her.

your all totally correct, I guess i forgot to say this was done for my photo class, and the idea was to shoot them with outfits that 'blended' into the wall, on the bottom picture I have lots of variations of it that the legs are much more detailed, but i used this one because it fit the requirements. thanks for all the comments!

here are a couple more that have better lighting overall:

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Sweet shots, I'd love to do something fun and creative like this. I gotta get out there and look for a location like that. Great work.

nice concepts. Keeps my eyes busy. Cool!

Second set is much better.

Nice idea and well executed. The black dress looses some detail in that last shot, but still nice.

Great job!

Canonista wrote in post #4324473
What's with the blue streaks under the eyes in the last pic?

I like the coat and the background together in #1. Maybe white stockings would have given more light to the bottom half of the image. It's a very good shot, I'm just throwing out an idea is all.

I agree, the legs get lost in the first photo but I like both pics.