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moviemaker

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Nov 20, 2007 07:49 | #1

Took the girls to the park and saw the trees lined up which got me thinking

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stathunter

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Nov 20, 2007 09:01 | #2

It does work. I know it is difficult to get kids to listen but maybe if the younger girl would have done the same that the front one did----it might have been a true classic shot.

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Nov 20, 2007 12:34 | #3

working for me...

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moviemaker
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Nov 20, 2007 15:49 | #4

Thanks for the words guys.

Our youngest daughter is a bit of a fidget and cannot stand still at all.

I was looking for that classic shot with both peering out. I told them I was going to count to 3 and then take the photo and that they both stand still. Just as I hit 3, the youngest leapt out.

It had us all in giggles and we just couldn't calm down enough to try again that evening.

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Nov 21, 2007 13:45 | #5

looks good

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Nov 21, 2007 14:41 | #6

Great idea.
DOF (Depth Of Field) is too shallow.
Second tree and second girl is out of focus.
Use a smaller aperture; f8, f11, f16 and so on.

Take the shot at two next time. LOL

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