That looks a lot better IMO.
Now that I see the greyish tint in the other one, I completely agree with you.

b8264d Member 177 posts Joined Jun 2006 Location: Ranson, WV USA More info | Jul 14, 2009 09:39 | #1201 RacingThoughts wrote in post #8277781 That looks a lot better IMO. Now that I see the greyish tint in the other one, I completely agree with you. My Gear
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DerekW Goldmember 1,211 posts Joined May 2007 Location: Sarnia Ontario Canada More info | Jul 14, 2009 12:13 | #1202 Beautiful!
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r-06264 Member 147 posts Likes: 2 Joined Dec 2007 More info | What do you guys think of this? My first attempts at OCF. 2. Mom and son. 430EX bare on the left. - Robin
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Tareq "I am very lazy, a normal consumer" More info | Jul 14, 2009 13:20 | #1204 r-06264 wrote in post #8279083 What do you guys think of this? My first attempts at OCF. 1. Nephew. Single 430EX bare flash to the right. ![]() 2. Mom and son. 430EX bare on the left. ![]() Both are nice shots, but both are overexposed, tone down the exposure or use some kind of modifiers at least to softening the light from the flash, avoid to use bare as much as you can for these type of shots. Galleries:
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r-06264 Member 147 posts Likes: 2 Joined Dec 2007 More info | Jul 14, 2009 13:36 | #1205 ^^^^ Thanks. Much appreciated. Dumb question - how did you tell that it is overexposed? - Robin
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Tareq "I am very lazy, a normal consumer" More info | Jul 14, 2009 13:51 | #1206 r-06264 wrote in post #8279234 ^^^^ Thanks. Much appreciated. Dumb question - how did you tell that it is overexposed? I dunno, but the clothes seems lack of details, even the first one the skin seems unnatural color at glance almost to the left side of his face. Galleries:
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AlejandroSandoval Goldmember 2,476 posts Joined Dec 2005 Location: Toronto, Canada More info | Jul 14, 2009 14:07 | #1207 Single Alien bee boomed in a Octabox
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gonzogolf dumb remark memorialized More info | Jul 14, 2009 14:21 | #1208 Tareq wrote in post #8279325 I dunno, but the clothes seems lack of details, even the first one the skin seems unnatural color at glance almost to the left side of his face.
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TMRDesign Cream of the Crop 23,883 posts Likes: 12 Joined Feb 2006 Location: Huntington Station, NY More info | Jul 14, 2009 14:33 | #1209 gonzogolf wrote in post #8279489 I can still see details in the whites so maybe its not technically overexposed. But it certainly seems a bit bright to the eye. It makes the skin seem unnatural. Nice shots though. It's not just visual. I checked the shot in Photoshop and looked at the numbers. There is a loss of detail and some clipping in the whites and the facial mask histogram shows some overexposure. Robert
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r-06264 Member 147 posts Likes: 2 Joined Dec 2007 More info | Jul 14, 2009 14:36 | #1210 TheAztech, that is STUNNING!! - Robin
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r-06264 Member 147 posts Likes: 2 Joined Dec 2007 More info | Jul 14, 2009 14:39 | #1211 Thanks for the comments guys. Much much appreciated. I do agree the face is a bit overexposed now that you mention it. Minor issue to sort out - Robin
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Tareq "I am very lazy, a normal consumer" More info | Jul 14, 2009 16:39 | #1212 r-06264 wrote in post #8279573 Thanks for the comments guys. Much much appreciated. I do agree the face is a bit overexposed now that you mention it. Minor issue to sort out New to this game and photography in general.Its alright, you will have time to learn more then do great photography sooner or later, just keep shooting and practice more, and we are here to help you as we were needing help before and everyday, my advise is that you start to read more about light and exposure, this will help you to improve your photography no doubt, as we all want to understand and learn about lighting as one so important thing in photography. Galleries:
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Cathpah Goldmember 4,259 posts Likes: 5 Joined Jan 2006 Location: Maine. More info | Jul 14, 2009 22:28 | #1213 speaking of blown highlights on faces! (guilty). Thank goodness he had a moustache to help me prevent having detail missing on the entire half of the face. Architecture
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