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Nov 26, 2007 17:03 |  #1

Hello All,

I posted a team collage earlier. I thought I would have a go at building one for my daughter. I am far from a designer so any tips would be greatly appreciated.

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Nov 26, 2007 17:22 |  #2

4 of the 5 shots have her in the same pose (arms stretched out). I'd suggest more of a variety of her standing or in action just to mix things up a bit.




  
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Nov 27, 2007 19:45 |  #3

The main thing I dont like is the way the state champion letters are cut off at either end...


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Nov 27, 2007 23:07 |  #4

Here are a few collages to share with ya.

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Nov 27, 2007 23:07 as a reply to  @ superdiver's post |  #5

http://www.action-fx.com (external link) and more at http://www.adambaumann​.com (external link)

There is another thread in here about sports photoshops, good place to get some ideas.

If you have more pictures with different poses that would make a huge difference, And the cut off of the "state championship" sign in the background is something that could really make a difference. I like what you are doing in the background with the images. Use more images like that for the background but make them bigger. Also the main images could be bigger and overlap. There is a lot of dead space. Also you need to try and make the images and the text work with each other, most of the time neglecting to do so will not make a sucessful poster. You can do this with color, size, location, accents, etc. Hope this can help.


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