Didn't do much with PP but hey it's my first real model - CC welcome
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Fyerfytr Senior Member  565 posts Joined Sep 2007 Location: Des Moines, Iowa More info | Nov 30, 2007 00:10 | #1 Didn't do much with PP but hey it's my first real model - CC welcome HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size.
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viperx27 Senior Member 305 posts Joined Aug 2007 More info | Nov 30, 2007 00:12 | #2  Permanent bangood start
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Nov 30, 2007 00:41 | #3 viperx27 wrote in post #4411444  good start I'd have either cropped tighter or got her all in the frame the left hand is the closest thing so it makes it look larger than it really is always good to try and get a bit of white on each side of the eye Ok first attempt so still learning... I have about 100 pics. This may not be the
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Anke "that rump shot is just adorable" UK SE Photographer of the Year 2009  30,454 posts Likes: 3 Joined Oct 2006 Location: Royal Tunbridge Wells, UK More info | Nov 30, 2007 00:44 | #4 You've gotten her to do a nice pose, but I agree with viperx27 about the cropping. Anke
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Nov 30, 2007 01:01 | #5 Anke wrote in post #4411571 You've gotten her to do a nice pose, but I agree with viperx27 about the cropping. Keep it up  Thanks, This was our first shoot so maybe the next one will have less first time jitters, I will up a few more.
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Chris71 Goldmember  1,585 posts Likes: 4 Joined Aug 2005 Location: Houston, TX More info | Nov 30, 2007 22:30 | #6 I like the crop on the first one, it has sort of a magazine cover look to it. Chris
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Nov 30, 2007 22:31 | #7 Chris71 wrote in post #4417157 I like the crop on the first one, it has sort of a magazine cover look to it. Very nice! Thanks! I kinda thought so too.
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Chris71 Goldmember 1,585 posts Likes: 4 Joined Aug 2005 Location: Houston, TX More info | Dec 01, 2007 23:36 | #9 Very nice, another good one! Chris
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SolidxSnake Goldmember  1,656 posts Likes: 2 Joined Nov 2007 More info | Dec 01, 2007 23:49 | #10 I like the first one, though I do agree with cropping less or cropping tighter. Troubleshooting 101 (see also: LightRules,perryge):
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MelisaP Member 248 posts Joined Jan 2007 More info | Dec 02, 2007 00:59 | #11 The second pose (as mentioned) looks uncomfortable, and the backdrop wrinkles distract me. I much prefer the first one, but minus the cropping issue that the others have mentioned.
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amironsi Goldmember  1,284 posts Joined Oct 2007 Location: Cairo - Egypt More info | Dec 02, 2007 01:29 | #12 the first one is good.... as for the second... i do like it still man... It's all about WHITE BALANCE.
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Dec 02, 2007 08:09 | #13 amironsi wrote in post #4423576 the first one is good.... as for the second... i do like it still man... Start playing with the lighting man... it would do you great work. Ok will do, this was both of ours first shoot so I didn't expect perfection this time around - I have the lights although I had them bumped down to about 1/4 power. I need a light meter... next on the list.
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Dec 02, 2007 22:55 | #14 Chris71 wrote in post #4423107 Very nice, another good one! Thanks Chris... I appreciate some positive along with the suggestions!  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size.
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SolidxSnake Goldmember 1,656 posts Likes: 2 Joined Nov 2007 More info | Dec 02, 2007 23:13 | #15 Hmm, last one I think would have been better if the model had turned to the left more, so she was looking more to the side rather than the back. Nice composition however Troubleshooting 101 (see also: LightRules,perryge):
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She's also got a good expression, pose just seems a tad weird IMO.