My Lovely Sister -c&c welcome--

Sister wanted me to take her Senior photos so I did. She liked these three the most and I agreed. Any need for improvement please let me know for final print --love suggestions etc even if you need to bag on em.

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merp wrote in post #4563901
She liked these three the most and I agreed... --love suggestions etc even if you need to bag on em.

I won't bag on your photos, but maybe your counting...

Nice pictures though. Here are some comments:

#1-#3: No catchlights! I like the poses though. A gentle smile in the first two would look better, I think. The expression is just right for #3. I like how each photo draws me to her face. A true portrait! The sleeve covering the back of her hand in #1 and #2 reduces the amount of exposed skin (which is one of the things that can draw attention away from the face).

#4: I'm not a fan of the camera angle on this shot. Nice smile though.

Also, since I don't know her personally, I can't say which pictures fit her personality best. I kind of like the feel of #3, but for a senior photo, it really depends on her style.

One last thing: Be careful with the crops. They seem to be a bit tight, which will be a problem if any of these are going to be framed.

Their was suppose to be three =X i dunno how the fourth got there. I completely forgot about the tight crop. I don't have catch lights =/ I don't have anything yet, but I am looking into equipment lately --and i see what you mean about the seelve.

thank you!