All constructive criticism is appreciated! Other than product photo's I'm pretty new so be gentle!
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Jryan Member  134 posts Gallery: 1 photo Likes: 2 Joined May 2007 Location: I've been asked that many times, as well what the ... is wrong with you? More info | Dec 29, 2007 16:41 | #1 All constructive criticism is appreciated! Other than product photo's I'm pretty new so be gentle! thanks. Canon 7D, 40D w/kit 28-135, Canon 24-105 f4L IS USM, Canon 70-200 f4L IS USM, Canon 17-55 f2.8 USM IS, Sigma 70-300mm f/4-5.6 DG APO, Canon 50 f1.4, Canon 60mm Macro, 580EXII, MR 14-EX, PS CS4
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FlyingPhotog Cream of the "Prop"  57,560 posts Likes: 178 Joined May 2007 Location: Probably Chasing Aircraft More info | Dec 29, 2007 16:45 | #2 Certainly nailed the moment but my mind wants to see more. IMO, it just feels too tight as the smoke has nowhere to go. I'm guessing the shooters face is nicely lit too by the powder flash. Jay
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Jryan THREAD STARTER Member 134 posts Gallery: 1 photo Likes: 2 Joined May 2007 Location: I've been asked that many times, as well what the ... is wrong with you? More info | Dec 29, 2007 16:47 | #3 FlyingPhotog wrote in post #4590798  Certainly nailed the moment but my mind wants to see more. IMO, it just feels too tight as the smoke has nowhere to go. I'm guessing the shooters face is nicely lit too by the powder flash. Cool, I'll try to widen it out some when we go next time. thanks! Canon 7D, 40D w/kit 28-135, Canon 24-105 f4L IS USM, Canon 70-200 f4L IS USM, Canon 17-55 f2.8 USM IS, Sigma 70-300mm f/4-5.6 DG APO, Canon 50 f1.4, Canon 60mm Macro, 580EXII, MR 14-EX, PS CS4
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Jryan THREAD STARTER Member 134 posts Gallery: 1 photo Likes: 2 Joined May 2007 Location: I've been asked that many times, as well what the ... is wrong with you? More info | Yep, now that you guys say it I completely agree. I'm going to try again. Canon 7D, 40D w/kit 28-135, Canon 24-105 f4L IS USM, Canon 70-200 f4L IS USM, Canon 17-55 f2.8 USM IS, Sigma 70-300mm f/4-5.6 DG APO, Canon 50 f1.4, Canon 60mm Macro, 580EXII, MR 14-EX, PS CS4
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iamaelephant Senior Member  336 posts Joined Dec 2007 Location: New Zealand More info | Dec 29, 2007 17:41 | #6 Well I really like the tight crop. -- Martin
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Jryan THREAD STARTER Member 134 posts Gallery: 1 photo Likes: 2 Joined May 2007 Location: I've been asked that many times, as well what the ... is wrong with you? More info | Dec 29, 2007 17:43 | #7 iamaelephant wrote in post #4591058 Well I really like the tight crop. thanks. I was looking to really get in on the striker. Canon 7D, 40D w/kit 28-135, Canon 24-105 f4L IS USM, Canon 70-200 f4L IS USM, Canon 17-55 f2.8 USM IS, Sigma 70-300mm f/4-5.6 DG APO, Canon 50 f1.4, Canon 60mm Macro, 580EXII, MR 14-EX, PS CS4
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NZDoug "old fashion"  1,499 posts Joined Jul 2007 Location: French Bay, on the shores of the mighty Manukau Harbour, Aoteoroa More info | Dec 29, 2007 17:56 | #8 Happily, I enjoy this as it is. HEY! HO!
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Jryan THREAD STARTER Member 134 posts Gallery: 1 photo Likes: 2 Joined May 2007 Location: I've been asked that many times, as well what the ... is wrong with you? More info | Dec 29, 2007 18:40 | #9 NZDoug wrote in post #4591152 Happily, I enjoy this as it is. cool thanks. Canon 7D, 40D w/kit 28-135, Canon 24-105 f4L IS USM, Canon 70-200 f4L IS USM, Canon 17-55 f2.8 USM IS, Sigma 70-300mm f/4-5.6 DG APO, Canon 50 f1.4, Canon 60mm Macro, 580EXII, MR 14-EX, PS CS4
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WxGuesser Senior Member  630 posts Joined Jul 2006 Location: Vacaville, Ca More info | Dec 29, 2007 19:13 | #10 that looks pretty sweet.. what was the speed at? Canon 350D | EF 17-40 f4 L | EF 50 f1.8 | "Kit Lens" | EF 70-200 f2.8 L on order | Sigma 70-300 APO DG Macro | EF 1.4x II L
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Jryan THREAD STARTER Member 134 posts Gallery: 1 photo Likes: 2 Joined May 2007 Location: I've been asked that many times, as well what the ... is wrong with you? More info | not really sure, I took some more shots after this one and adjusted as light changed. I'm still in the experiment with setting phase. Canon 7D, 40D w/kit 28-135, Canon 24-105 f4L IS USM, Canon 70-200 f4L IS USM, Canon 17-55 f2.8 USM IS, Sigma 70-300mm f/4-5.6 DG APO, Canon 50 f1.4, Canon 60mm Macro, 580EXII, MR 14-EX, PS CS4
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TeeWhy "Monkey's uncle"  10,596 posts Likes: 5 Joined Feb 2006 Location: Pasadena, CA More info | Dec 30, 2007 00:38 | #12 Agree about the cropping being too tight. But the angle is very flat and centered.  Gallery: http://tomyi.smugmug.com/
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Analog6 Senior Member  565 posts Joined Jan 2007 Location: Terranora, northern NSW, Australia More info | Dec 30, 2007 00:43 | #13 I like the tight crop but would like to see a longer shot too, showing the concentration that must have been on the face of the shooter and the end of the barrel (for perspective). But hey, it's a great start! Odille
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rockabilly808 Goldmember  1,700 posts Likes: 8 Joined Dec 2006 Location: Castine, Maine by way of Kanoehe, Hawaii More info | Dec 30, 2007 01:00 | #14 as has been mentioned the crop is a bit tight otherwise though I think it's an awesome shot Nathan
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zakkploof Mostly Lurking  14 posts Joined Dec 2007 Location: Saint albans, VT More info | Dec 30, 2007 02:14 | #15 Wow, timing's great and just looks amazing, i agree with alot of the post's, maybe widen it up a bit and include more of his face.
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