Just finished shooting these girls. I was very happy with how they came out. C&C welcome.
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TTGator Senior Member 649 posts Joined Aug 2007 Location: High Point, NC More info | Jan 13, 2008 20:26 | #1 Just finished shooting these girls. I was very happy with how they came out. C&C welcome. 2. 3. 4. 5DII & 5DIII | 85 F1.8 | 100mm F2.8 Macro | 16-35 II L | 35L | 24-105 F4L [COLOR=black]| 70-200 F2.8 IS L | Speedlite 540EX | AB800(x4) | Manfrotto 561BHDV Monopod |
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fotojoem Senior Member 607 posts Likes: 1 Joined Dec 2007 More info | Jan 13, 2008 20:41 | #2 The images are Great! One note may be to move your subjects further away from Joe
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LoriKelso Senior Member 261 posts Likes: 1 Joined Dec 2006 Location: Near Houston More info | Jan 13, 2008 20:54 | #3 Love them! The vignettes really add to these already adorable photos! Canon 5D, 85 1.2. 50 1.2 on it's way, 24-105, 70-200 2.8 IS
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lbeck Goldmember 1,148 posts Likes: 6 Joined Jan 2008 Location: Tampa, FL More info | Hey neighbor! Great shots, my favorite is the first one, good comp, good lighting and really sharp. Man, I can't wait to get my AB800! 5D3 | 35L | 85 | 135L
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Jan 13, 2008 21:19 | #5 fotojoem wrote in post #4697043 The images are Great! One note may be to move your subjects further away from the backdrop. Yeah, I would move them further away if I could, but then the couch in my living room would be all you would see as I would have to be taking the picture from the other side of it 5DII & 5DIII | 85 F1.8 | 100mm F2.8 Macro | 16-35 II L | 35L | 24-105 F4L [COLOR=black]| 70-200 F2.8 IS L | Speedlite 540EX | AB800(x4) | Manfrotto 561BHDV Monopod |
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Jan 13, 2008 21:20 | #6 lbeck wrote in post #4697197 Hey neighbor! Great shots, my favorite is the first one, good comp, good lighting and really sharp. Man, I can't wait to get my AB800! In the second one her skin looks a little orange, maybe over processed. The third and fourth are great too. Do you like the wrinkles in the backdrop? If not then you could photoshop them out. Some people tend to like them and some don't. I also like the vignetting but I think it's a little heavy, especially on the first two. Now, go to bed, you have to get up early and go to work! Yeah, I like a little wrinke... 3 has a little much for me, but I think I PS'd some of them out on the one I had printed. 5DII & 5DIII | 85 F1.8 | 100mm F2.8 Macro | 16-35 II L | 35L | 24-105 F4L [COLOR=black]| 70-200 F2.8 IS L | Speedlite 540EX | AB800(x4) | Manfrotto 561BHDV Monopod |
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Jan 13, 2008 21:21 | #7 LoriKelso wrote in post #4697154 Love them! The vignettes really add to these already adorable photos! Thanks Lori. Their mom thought so too! 5DII & 5DIII | 85 F1.8 | 100mm F2.8 Macro | 16-35 II L | 35L | 24-105 F4L [COLOR=black]| 70-200 F2.8 IS L | Speedlite 540EX | AB800(x4) | Manfrotto 561BHDV Monopod |
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Jan 14, 2008 13:06 | #8 I actually added the vignettes with a free action I found! 5DII & 5DIII | 85 F1.8 | 100mm F2.8 Macro | 16-35 II L | 35L | 24-105 F4L [COLOR=black]| 70-200 F2.8 IS L | Speedlite 540EX | AB800(x4) | Manfrotto 561BHDV Monopod |
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CheetaPita Goldmember 2,503 posts Likes: 3 Joined Apr 2007 Location: Louisiana More info | Jan 14, 2008 13:29 | #9 precious children and precious photos too! i like vignettes usually but i think some of these are a little strong (the 2nd picture mainly) - maybe if you could just tone it down a little...it wouldnt distract from the absolutely adorable photo http://carleymacphotography.blogspot.com/
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Jan 14, 2008 13:33 | #10 Yeah, the more I look at it the more the vignette on #2 stands out as being too much. 5DII & 5DIII | 85 F1.8 | 100mm F2.8 Macro | 16-35 II L | 35L | 24-105 F4L [COLOR=black]| 70-200 F2.8 IS L | Speedlite 540EX | AB800(x4) | Manfrotto 561BHDV Monopod |
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AlejandroSandoval Goldmember 2,476 posts Joined Dec 2005 Location: Toronto, Canada More info | Jan 14, 2008 13:36 | #11 The images look good, But I would blur the background. Twitter
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lbeck Goldmember 1,148 posts Likes: 6 Joined Jan 2008 Location: Tampa, FL More info | Jan 14, 2008 14:21 | #12 TTGator wrote in post #4701438 Yeah, the more I look at it the more the vignette on #2 stands out as being too much. For #3, adding the "bars" like that was the only solution I could come up with to get an 11x14 crop without losing feet. Does it work well, or does anyone have any other suggestions for pulling this off? Only other thing off the top of my head is to clone more of the background where the bars are. I suppose if I made the background ALL white, this would be simple, but I didn't want to mess with the look of the muslin too much. To do it properly, you would have to clone the background which is pretty hard to do since the varying wrinkles are showing. 5D3 | 35L | 85 | 135L
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lbeck Goldmember 1,148 posts Likes: 6 Joined Jan 2008 Location: Tampa, FL More info | Jan 14, 2008 14:25 | #13 TTGator wrote in post #4701252 I actually added the vignettes with a free action I found! Oh, I forgot to mentoin. I know you have CS3....in acr on the last tab or next to the last tab you can do vignetting and control how much you put on the image with a slider. You can reverse the effect also. it will give you more control than an action. 5D3 | 35L | 85 | 135L
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Jan 14, 2008 14:29 | #14 lbeck wrote in post #4701851 Oh, I forgot to mentoin. I know you have CS3....in acr on the last tab or next to the last tab you can do vignetting and control how much you put on the image with a slider. You can reverse the effect also. it will give you more control than an action. Sure, NOW you tell me 5DII & 5DIII | 85 F1.8 | 100mm F2.8 Macro | 16-35 II L | 35L | 24-105 F4L [COLOR=black]| 70-200 F2.8 IS L | Speedlite 540EX | AB800(x4) | Manfrotto 561BHDV Monopod |
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Flo Gimmie Some Lovin 44,987 posts Likes: 16 Joined Jul 2007 Location: Nanaimo,B.C. More info | I like the 11x14 you're a great friend, but if Zombies chase us, I am tripping you.
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