dr_who Senior Member 291 posts Joined Dec 2005 More info | Jan 18, 2008 19:06 | #1 Been playing with flash and GF asked me to take photo of your shoes. It is set on a while IKEA armchair and lit with an shoot thru umbrella. Some PS is done. Please critisize.
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CurtisN Master Flasher  19,129 posts Likes: 11 Joined Apr 2005 Location: Northern Illinois, US More info | Jan 18, 2008 19:12 | #2 Nicely done. "If you're not having fun, your pictures will reflect that." - Joe McNally
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RichNY Goldmember  1,817 posts Likes: 3 Joined Sep 2006 More info | Jan 18, 2008 19:19 | #3 I think your biggest issues are with the photo styling. First you shouldn't have taken the image on a surface that indents. The second issue deals with the issue of shooting a non-quality shoe from an angle that shows off the shoe's flaws. Nikon D3, D300, 10.5 Fisheye, 35 f/1.4, 50 f/1.4, 85 f/1.4, Zeiss 100 f/2, 105 f/2.5, 200 f/4 Micro, 200 f/2, 300 f/2.8, 14-24, 24-70, 70-200, SB-800x4, SB-900, SU-800, (3) Sunpak 120J (2) Profoto Acute 2400s,Chimera softboxes, (4)PW Multimax, (6) C-stands, (3) Bogen Superbooms, Autopoles
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Jan 19, 2008 03:46 | #4 RichNY wrote in post #4732567  I think your biggest issues are with the photo styling. First you shouldn't have taken the image on a surface that indents. The second issue deals with the issue of shooting a non-quality shoe from an angle that shows off the shoe's flaws. Specifically the stitching up the back of the shoe is both off center and uneven. I would treat this like a portrait where you have a person with an asymmetrical face where this is like a straight on shot. I would have angled the shoe in such a way as to make this stitching less noticeable. Don't share the comment about the stitching with your GF as it could be a very expensive comment  haha, i didn't notice it, but now you mention it, i makes sense. i'll keep it a secret to her though. 5D, 50mm F1.4, Sigma 24-70, EF 70-200mm F2.8 IS
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yogestee "my posts can be a little colourful"  More info | Jan 19, 2008 07:22 | #5 dr_who wrote in post #4732477 Been playing with flash and GF asked me to take photo of your shoes. It is set on a while IKEA armchair and lit with an shoot thru umbrella. Some PS is done. Please critisize. Nice work...Hand these images to an imager and graphic artist and you have classic catalog shots.. Jurgen
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