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Feb 09, 2008 13:16 |  #16

My only suggestion would be fill flash and focus seems off in some of them. But a good start.




  
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Feb 09, 2008 15:59 as a reply to  @ post 4883123 |  #17

mrmarkin.. i agree with you there is to much in the background.. and this is what I was trying to show with the picture I cropped, but like you said the picture doesn't allow a good corp...


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Feb 09, 2008 18:52 |  #18

I like number 3, but two things are bothering me. One, is the vehicle and two, is the light pole growing out of her head.

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Feb 10, 2008 00:12 |  #19

I really like the comp. in #3 so I hope you don't mind, good job BTW
I used the LOMO effect, cloned a few items and added some sharpening

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Feb 10, 2008 04:55 |  #20

Number 3 has two major issues with it that hit me right away, the horizion isn't straight and there is a power pole growing out of the girls head, the edited version improves the colours but you have to make sure you watch your backgrounds all the time.

Number 5 is out of focus, but the idea is good.

Number 6, I like the idea of the shot but I think you need to get down lower, at the moment it is sort of head on, nothing separates the couple from the background so it all blends together, if you get down lower you could have the train lines lead to the couple and then have alot more sky as the background.

Probably the only other thing that I would say is that you haven't really used the lighting to your advantage, there are too many heavy shadows.

I'm sorry if I have been a bit brutal, but the thing is there is potential in what you have done.


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