Erin,
Several things..
1. Your little girl is an angel, how sweet.
2. Your poses and ideas are fabulous, I love them!
3. Overall composition looks good to me..
But I will say, I find your color to be off in all of these.The second and third ones are the worst, I think. I get a cyan color cast, perhaps? They just seem a little flat. I think they could easily pop a lot more. They really seem to be fabulous images at heart.
Here's my five min play.. not perfect, but I am so exhausted, haha, I really should go to bed!


