Model Shoot!

Here are the keepers from my second model shoot. Tell me what you think!

Natural lighting + Reflector. A couple may have used 430EX for fill.
20D + 50 f1.4 + 17-40 f4

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like the pictures, but dislike the makeup greatly

Nice job overall. The first one is dark and the crop is kind of awkward. The last one looks out of focus. #3 is my fave but there is a hair shaved off her elbow. I like the makeup.

3 is my fav as well. good use of thirds and negative space. nice shot!

Good locations and composition. I too like #3. They all seem to be a bit desaturated. Not sure if that was the intent. And your background in #6 needs to be fixed. It looks like she has antenna and she's too pretty for that.

IMO #3 is, by far, the best. I think they could all use a bit of saturation.

Really like number three, but it is cropped very close to her head and elbow... Still an excellent shot though

Thanks for all the crits!

Yes, #6 is slightly out of focus, but I really liked the overall shot so I threw it in. I wouldn't blow it up or anything, but I think it works at a relatively small size.

And the desaturation is intentional.