First, Welcome to the Forum!!
The composition is nice, but I'd either rotate it CC about 1 degree to straighten, or simply crop the top off. ... I like the top to balance the pic, though, so I'd rotate. I like the dried reeds, but some of them are too close to the subject, and are distracting, for example the one just above and parallel to the female subject's back, the stem in the space between the two faces (about chin-level), and the stem sticking out of the male subject's neck. ... Those can all be removed pretty easily. And the lighing is a bit flat, but some simple selective lighting adjustments can help focus emphasis on the subjects.
But as a first post, very nice. ... Keep 'em coming!