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Mar 29, 2008 21:23 |  #1

Please give it to me straight. I need to improve.


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Mar 29, 2008 21:28 |  #2

cool shot!


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Mar 29, 2008 22:03 as a reply to  @ canonman4life's post |  #3

Sorry bro I like it.


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Mar 29, 2008 22:46 |  #4

Great shot. For us to be able to give you feedback on a shot, you can't make it look so great :)


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Mar 29, 2008 22:47 as a reply to  @ stewartsj3's post |  #5

I love the story it tells!

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Mar 30, 2008 18:36 |  #6

Wow. Everyone thanks! If anyone has any critiques, they will be welcomed.


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Mar 30, 2008 19:19 |  #7

I think it could use a little more contrast, and it looks a little bright across her chest. Not necessarily blown out, but it's a bit of a distraction.


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Mar 30, 2008 20:03 as a reply to  @ Ainoko's post |  #8

Thanks for the feedback. I changed the levels and contrast. It looks a bit better, but I think that area is just overexposed.


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Mar 30, 2008 20:05 |  #9

I liked the first one better....maybe try a "darken brush" just on her chest?


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Mar 30, 2008 20:07 |  #10

the subject and composition are great. I just like my black and whites really black (more contrast perhaps). Not everyone does. Leave this images alone I think.


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