Either of these work at all?

Spied an intimate moment on a balcony at a party and snapped a few. Unfortunately, I was in AV mode and the shutter speed was 1/10th. Anyway, the moment was fleeting and I wasn't fast enough at the controls to get in a better setting, but this is what I got. The background is the Wisconsin State capital building.

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In my humble opinion, neither of them work. Both are out of focus and grainy. But that's just me - someone else might think they are wonderful!

What do YOU think of them?

I like them, they are grainy I do agree with Debbie, but they are "soft" grainy, if you get what i mean......

i think focus is overrated in general.. the fist is almost 'right', but her expression isn't too clear. the second doesn't incite anything in me.

^^^ I agree that OOF shots can sometimes be effective, but in this case its just too much OOF.

Neither would have been a keeper for me. Maybe I'm just not artistic enough.