Another attempt at Poster/Collage - Golf - C&C Welcomed

Aaagogo wrote in post #5362321
do they allow more skin there?

or you just want to join Jason in the land down under

A little of both? I honestly hate this overprotective put everyone in a bubble way we're heading over here. At least down under I'd have a kangaroo to shoot and noone would complain it's showing too much pouch.

You did a great job

It's not the length of the shirts causing the "skin" to show, it's the low-rise pants, and these are college players, right? that means they're ADULTS, so no big deal. If they were high school, maybe a different standard would be in order....

I really like them...skin and all. Maybe I'm asking a stupid question..but......Why is there no text or logo of their school?

beezwax wrote in post #5353058
however, I'm not too sure if the "skin" showing in #2(Tara) is appropriate for this type of work. don't get me wrong...personally I like it, but she/other viewers may not.

just my .02

The skin aspect was not raised by me. It's fine with me.

AAA:

These are definately great shots and a great collage.

Personally, I like the second a lot more. Only because the green all fades into each other. The photos are more symmetrical from the inside out, where as #1 is busy and my eyes jump from player to player.

No matter what, you really do good work and have a knack for fitting everything.

I'd be very happy if I was your client/team.

because even though I attend this school, this collage is not an official school recognized product, thus I'm not legally allowed to use the school logos and fonts.

wayovrpar wrote in post #5363820
I really like them...skin and all. Maybe I'm asking a stupid question..but......Why is there no text or logo of their school?

Tara's probably my favorite player to shot on the team, she plays real well and she's the only one that shows emotion when she sink a good putt, however, most of the time, her expressions are the same.

khall wrote in post #5360349
They both look great. The "skin" aspect (second) is not really an issue, how ever 3 out of the 4 showing her full face have the same expression.

posted a revised version

updated 1st post with a new poster... comments please

The text works much better with the images. Nice job

Your posters are very inspiring, I am a novice photographer and I would love to try this style of "collage" poster with my twin 7 year old boys playing baseball.

Thanx, I get mine from Adam (BaumannPhotography)

there's still something not right with it though.. but my girls love it

Those are cool.

Looks like fun work.