I was finally able to get close enough to this guy to get a decent photo. Taken this past Saturday in central NJ near Princeton. What could I have done to improve the photo? Thanks.
JohnJos Senior Member 273 posts Joined Feb 2008 Location: Haddonfield, New Jersey More info | Apr 21, 2008 18:58 | #1 |
Stormin_24 Cream of the Crop More info | Apr 21, 2008 19:01 | #2 W New Hampshire State Bird: Purple Finch
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JohnJos THREAD STARTER Senior Member 273 posts Joined Feb 2008 Location: Haddonfield, New Jersey More info | Apr 21, 2008 19:33 | #3 Thanks! I did crop it pretty tight to the bird. I guess I'm still more of a birder than a photographer. So I don't always focus on composition, etc. but more on the bird. Still learning since I've only had a DSLR for a few months now. John
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wallybud Taking the "Walk of Shame" 2,980 posts Likes: 1 Joined Feb 2008 Location: Buffalo, NY More info | Apr 21, 2008 20:22 | #4 crop looks fine to me. I assume shot in RAW? USe vibrance slider to bring up some of that color data gathered by your sensor my friend. its a bluebird isnt it. make that boy blue! maybe a bit of contrast. if you want to be on the safe side go to curves nd to the preset box ontop, slect linear contrast. then maybe a tad of sharpening to help out the bigma (although thats very nice for full zoom =) -Walt-
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BSBXTi Goldmember 1,563 posts Joined May 2007 Location: NJ, USA More info | Apr 21, 2008 20:34 | #5 Very nice shot! I agree with what Walt has said in his post! I would clone out that small little branch in the bottom right. Brenton Biggs
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JohnJos THREAD STARTER Senior Member 273 posts Joined Feb 2008 Location: Haddonfield, New Jersey More info | Apr 21, 2008 20:52 | #6 Thanks for your positive comments. I appreciate your suggestions and will play around with the RAW file to make the colors more vibrant. Stay tuned... John
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wallybud Taking the "Walk of Shame" 2,980 posts Likes: 1 Joined Feb 2008 Location: Buffalo, NY More info | Apr 21, 2008 20:54 | #7 yeah (BSB) youve got such a perfect BG for cloning get rid of that twig! hahah -Walt-
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ajosteve Cream of the Crop 16,468 posts Likes: 8 Joined Sep 2007 Location: Grand Canyon Arizona More info | Apr 21, 2008 22:57 | #8 Beautiful shot of this one! Steve
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JohnJos THREAD STARTER Senior Member 273 posts Joined Feb 2008 Location: Haddonfield, New Jersey More info | Apr 29, 2008 22:23 | #9 Thanks everyone for you comments. John
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downywp Goldmember 4,004 posts Joined Sep 2006 Location: Everett,WA More info | Looking good...the re-worked image is especially nice!
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ajosteve Cream of the Crop 16,468 posts Likes: 8 Joined Sep 2007 Location: Grand Canyon Arizona More info | Apr 30, 2008 07:49 | #11 Looks great, now get rid of that stick down in the corner...he..he.... Steve
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JohnJos THREAD STARTER Senior Member 273 posts Joined Feb 2008 Location: Haddonfield, New Jersey More info | Apr 30, 2008 07:57 | #12 Thanks. It was a steeper learning curve than I envisioned not having done a lot of post-processing of digital images in the past other than applying unsharp mask and tweaking the levels a bit. Plus I don't have Photoshop so I can't always directly apply suggested processing directions/procedures. I typically use RawTherapee and PaintShopPro in Windows but I only run WinXP on a older Toshiba laptop with a 15" screen. I processed this image on my Ubuntu Linux PC where I have a 20" LCD monitor. I used UFRAW (plugin) and The Gimp. I do think it came out looking spectacular but all C&C is welcome. John
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JohnJos THREAD STARTER Senior Member 273 posts Joined Feb 2008 Location: Haddonfield, New Jersey More info | Apr 30, 2008 07:59 | #13 Steve, I'll have to give that a try just to see what I can do with it. PSP has a "clone brush" tool that I've used to mask out things like that stick. Not sure if PS or The Gimp has that tools as well. Thanks! John
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SindriSkulason Cream of the Crop 10,403 posts Likes: 13 Joined May 2005 Location: Iceland More info | Apr 30, 2008 10:51 | #14 That re-worked image looks excellent to me. Beautiful pose and composition. I don't think the crop is too tight at all. Best regards
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JohnJos THREAD STARTER Senior Member 273 posts Joined Feb 2008 Location: Haddonfield, New Jersey More info | Apr 30, 2008 12:38 | #15 thx Sindri John
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