So I got hired for my first Senior session. I have tons of pics just need some feedback before i get on with the edit process.... How'd I do?....
prilamai Senior Member  505 posts Joined Jan 2008 Location: Central Alabama More info | Apr 21, 2008 22:54 | #1 So I got hired for my first Senior session. I have tons of pics just need some feedback before i get on with the edit process.... How'd I do?.... April K
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xepherys Senior Member  807 posts Joined May 2006 Location: 17TLH2445607250 More info | Apr 22, 2008 01:25 | #2 I love the blue wall in the second shot, but the shirt is too blown out. Good first shoot though! My Gear: EOS 7D .|. EF 85/1.8 .-. EF 24/2.8 .-. EF 70-200/4L .-. EF 24-70/2.8L .|. 580EX-II
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Stephie Goldmember  1,388 posts Joined Jul 2006 Location: Arkansas More info | Apr 22, 2008 01:39 | #3 Love the first shot. Stephanie Powers
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evorgsumaf Senior Member  932 posts Joined Jun 2007 Location: In Great Falls MT More info | Apr 22, 2008 09:56 | #4 I LOVE number one. The only thing I would fix is the piece of grass that is by Her right eye. Great job. I would love to see more. Brandon
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Apr 22, 2008 09:57 | #5 xepherys wrote in post #5378676  I love the blue wall in the second shot, but the shirt is too blown out. Good first shoot though! Stephanie Powers wrote in post #5378733 Love the first shot. The second is good too. I do like the 'blown outness' of the shirt. You can get away with that for seniors i think. More of a funky contrasty effect is really popular right now. I just don't like her expression there The shirt is not blown out in the original. I have added a Kubota action to the image which makes it look hot. Thanks for the feedback! April K
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JonathanTaylor Senior Member 699 posts Likes: 7 Joined Feb 2008 Location: Sterling, Virginia More info | Apr 22, 2008 09:58 | #6 I think they're fantastic. Senior photography is my favorite thing to shoot right now and you've posted some wonderful examples. 5DII, 7D, 20-35 2.8L, 35L, 40 Pancake, 50 1.4, 85 1.8, 135 2.0L, 300 f/4L IS, 580EXII, Alien Bees, Bags & Bags & More Bags.
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Apr 22, 2008 10:04 | #7 By request to see a few more    April K
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Apr 22, 2008 10:05 | #8 Jonathan Taylor wrote in post #5380345 I think they're fantastic. Senior photography is my favorite thing to shoot right now and you've posted some wonderful examples. And I do agree, those 3 little blades are quite distracting. Yeah I will get rid of them for the final edit. I have added a few more to view- Haven't quite finished them but I am working... April K
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HeatherSik Goldmember  3,434 posts Likes: 1 Joined Dec 2007 Location: Kalamazoo, Michigan More info | Apr 22, 2008 12:05 | #9 Nice job on these.. I really like the 1st one of the 2nd post however, I don't like that the jeans are on the top leg but not on the bottom. I am not 100% sure I like her skin tone in the 2nd photo but I like the pic.. Seems to be a color cast.. Nice work over all. She will be very happy with them.. Heather S.
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sideeffects Senior Member  760 posts Likes: 9 Joined Mar 2008 Location: SoCal More info | Apr 22, 2008 12:11 | #10 Very nice shots! I really like the second image in both posts. Canon 5D mkII: 16-35 f-2.8L, 24-70mm f-2.8L, 70-200mm f-2.8L IS, 50mm f-1.4, 85mm f-1.8
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ded007 Senior Member 848 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jun 2006 Location: Kansas City, MO More info | Apr 22, 2008 12:32 | #11 I really like them all. It may be my display (at my day job) but the USM on her eyes in the very first pic looks overdone. They are REALLY contrasty. 1Ds MKIII box with a pinhole punched in it.
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Apr 22, 2008 16:58 | #12 ded007 wrote in post #5381401 I really like them all. It may be my display (at my day job) but the USM on her eyes in the very first pic looks overdone. They are REALLY contrasty. I think is is the compression. They look less weird in the big regular image. April K
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Apr 22, 2008 17:00 | #13 HeatherSik wrote in post #5381217 Nice job on these.. I really like the 1st one of the 2nd post however, I don't like that the jeans are on the top leg but not on the bottom. I am not 100% sure I like her skin tone in the 2nd photo but I like the pic.. Seems to be a color cast.. Nice work over all. She will be very happy with them.. The jeans are actually shorts and I didn't care for it either. I may crop it a bit tighter. The color cast you see is actually a Kubota action. April K
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