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First attemp sport shot...C&C please...

 
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Apr 24, 2008 12:49 |  #1

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Apr 24, 2008 13:23 |  #2

What aperture was this shot at??

I like how the subjects are on the lower third of the frame... I think if you used a shallow depth of field, you could have blurred the far water which would isolate the subjects more...




  
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Apr 25, 2008 00:26 |  #3

joebokeh wrote in post #5395731 (external link)
What aperture was this shot at??

I like how the subjects are on the lower third of the frame... I think if you used a shallow depth of field, you could have blurred the far water which would isolate the subjects more...

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Apr 25, 2008 06:44 |  #4

I like the composition. agree about the DOF. Looks oversaturated to me . . . particularly in the reds.

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Apr 25, 2008 11:38 |  #5

RAPhotography wrote in post #5400652 (external link)
I like the composition. agree about the DOF. Looks oversaturated to me . . . particularly in the reds.

ryan

thanks you all...i will take noted...cos this is my first attemp...need more to learn..im just two month photog...:D


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