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jpon2 Member  165 posts Joined Nov 2007 Location: Yonkers (small village outside of NYC:) More info | May 08, 2008 17:43 | #1 What else would you do or not do with this shot? HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size. http://jp.exposuremanager.com
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May 08, 2008 18:23 | #2 It's technically very good, but it doesn't do a thing for me. The things you do for yourself die with you, the things you do for others live forever.
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garryknight Cream of the Crop  More info | May 08, 2008 18:43 | #3 I have to agree with Chauncey. For me, it's either got too many subjects and no context, or it's all context with no subject. Garry Knight
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RightCraniumImaging Senior Member  416 posts Likes: 1 Joined Apr 2008 Location: Seattle More info | May 08, 2008 18:54 | #4 Dont know if it will make a big difference, but maybe take out the ONE WAY sign and the red sign thing off the light post. Also maybe try in B@W (Insert Over Used Photography Quote Here)
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sidx001 Goldmember  1,212 posts Joined Apr 2008 Location: Northern KY More info | May 08, 2008 19:23 | #5 something maybe like this. it draws the attention more... James Smith
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Flo Gimmie Some Lovin  44,987 posts Likes: 16 Joined Jul 2007 Location: Nanaimo,B.C. More info | Its real busy..but it is a nice sharp good color photo. you're a great friend, but if Zombies chase us, I am tripping you.
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jpon2 THREAD STARTER Member 165 posts Joined Nov 2007 Location: Yonkers (small village outside of NYC:) More info | May 09, 2008 04:18 | #7 Thank you guys for your comments. You gave me something to think about. I wonder if a title that captures what went through my mind as I took this shot would help.  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size. http://jp.exposuremanager.com
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RAPhotography Senior Member  465 posts Likes: 10 Joined Jan 2008 Location: US More info | May 09, 2008 07:34 | #8 I have to agree with the others. compositionally, it works fine. I don't think it's so much busy, however, as it lacks any clear subject or point of interest. For me it's just a street corner with some pretty trees. Also, I personally don't feel that the title helps since all I really see are some signs and a crosswalk . . . nothing that makes me think "crossroads". Since you know the area, it obviously has a different meaning for you but I'm not sure that it translates to the viewer.
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ghosh Senior Member  874 posts Joined Sep 2005 Location: Edinburgh More info | May 09, 2008 13:22 | #9 With human every where on earth, this looks too deserted! #include <iostream>
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Yogi Berra said "When you come to a fork in the road, take it.". The things you do for yourself die with you, the things you do for others live forever.
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guitarman2977 Member  163 posts Joined Mar 2008 Location: Minneapolis, MN More info | May 09, 2008 15:38 | #11 I would also be curious to see it in black and white. ** 365 Project **
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